Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，例如“chat each other”应为“chat with each other”，“It's his beneficial”应为“It's beneficial”。建议注意语法准确性，避免拼写错误，并且回答时尽量简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, and we usually talk face to face. It helps strengthen our friendship.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“what we happened today”应为“what happened to us today”，“it's his good”应为“it's good”。建议多练习表达日常话题时的正确句型，避免重复词汇。

예시: We usually talk about what happened during the day and share our feelings. I think this helps us understand each other better.

제안: 回答缺少直接回答问题的主题句，且“facial moods”表达不准确，应为“facial expressions”。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体细节支持，注意用词准确。

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I can better understand my friend's feelings through their facial expressions, which helps us share our thoughts more deeply.

제안: 回答中“gather moods”表达不自然，建议使用“read emotions”或“understand feelings”。同时，回答可以更连贯，使用连接词。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read emotions better, and I can give my advice or opinions more sincerely.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“give our a chance”应为“give us a chance”，“some somebody never”不合逻辑。建议简化句子，确保表达清楚。

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends. Communication can sometimes lead to arguments, but I try to avoid conflicts to keep our friendship strong.

× we always chat each other face to face.

✓ we always chat with each other face to face.

“chat”后面需要用介词“with”来连接宾语“each other”，否则句子不完整。

× It's his beneficial for our to enhance our bonds.

✓ It's beneficial for us to enhance our bonds.

“his”用错了，应该用“it is”表示“这对我们有益”；“our”应改为“us”作宾语。

× we can talk about what we happened today and and more feelings.

✓ we can talk about what happened to us today and more feelings.

“happened”是过去式，前面不需要“we”，应改为“what happened to us today”表示“今天发生的事情”。

× In my opinion, it's his good for ourselves.

✓ In my opinion, it's good for us.

“his”用错，应为“it is”；“ourselves”用错，应该用宾格“us”。

× Absolutely communicate with each other face to face.

✓ I absolutely prefer to communicate with each other face to face.

句子缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整表达。

× The reason why I like this is that I can get the feelings through their facial moods and we can share our feelings.

✓ The reason why I like this is that I can get feelings through their facial expressions and we can share our feelings.

“facial moods”用词不当，应为“facial expressions”；“the feelings”改为“feelings”更自然。

× I like to communicate face to face.

✓ I like to communicate face-to-face.

“face-to-face”作为副词短语应用连字符连接。

× It's good for me to gather moods and I can give my advice or my opinion with good moods.

✓ It's good for me to understand moods and I can give my advice or my opinion with a good mood.

“gather moods”表达不当，应为“understand moods”；“good moods”应为单数“a good mood”。

× Actually communication is a double edged sword.

✓ Actually, communication is a double-edged sword.

“double edged”应加连字符“double-edged”；句首应加逗号。

× They give our a chance to argue with each other but some somebody never.

✓ They give us a chance to argue with each other but some people never do.

“our”应为宾格“us”；“some somebody”用词错误，应为“some people”；句尾缺少谓语“do”。