Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some unnatural phrases and minor grammar errors. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'As an extra person,' say 'Personally,' and avoid repeating 'chatting' unnecessarily. Also, use correct plural forms and prepositions.

예시: Personally, I really enjoy socializing and chatting with different kinds of people. I like chatting both via social media and face to face, but I mostly prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more convenient and personal.

제안: Your answer covers the topic but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrasing. Work on subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition.

예시: Usually, I chat with close friends about my daily life, hobbies, and goals. However, when I talk to people I don't know well, I tend to discuss general topics like the weather or everyday events.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to avoid repeating phrases and finish your sentences fully. Use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly and provide specific reasons.

예시: I prefer talking with one person because we can have deeper conversations and discuss ideas more thoroughly. Although I sometimes chat with groups, it makes me a bit uncomfortable since it's harder to focus on individual opinions.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be clearer and more coherent. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to express your feelings.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to express my ideas and emotions clearly. In contrast, social media can be complicated since I find it difficult to convey all my feelings, which makes me uncomfortable.

제안: Your answer is good but contains some awkward phrasing. Instead of 'I'm not arguable person,' say 'I'm not an argumentative person.' Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons.

예시: I'm not an argumentative person because I value good relationships with my close friends. However, if I do argue with someone, I try to resolve the issue quickly since disagreements make me feel uncomfortable.

× I really enjoy socializing and chatting with different kind of people

✓ I really enjoy socializing and chatting with different kinds of people

The phrase 'different kind of people' is incorrect because 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. The correct phrase is 'different kinds of people' to indicate variety.

× Usually with friends whom I know and who is close to me I I enjoy to chat about my daily life, about my hobbies and goals

✓ Usually with friends whom I know and who are close to me, I enjoy chatting about my daily life, my hobbies, and goals

The subject 'who' refers to 'friends', which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'enjoy to chat' is incorrect; 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('chatting').

× I prefer to talk about with individual and group of people

✓ I prefer to talk with individuals and groups of people

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'individual' and 'group' should be pluralized to 'individuals' and 'groups' to match the context.

× especially who is close to me

✓ especially those who are close to me

The pronoun 'who' refers to 'those' (people), which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'those' clarifies the plural subject.