Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some minor language errors and redundancy. For example, "taking with them" should be "talking with them," and "a new new things" is incorrect. Try to avoid repetition and check for small mistakes. Also, use linking words like "because" or "which" to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my thoughts and feelings openly. It helps me feel relaxed and supported, especially during difficult times. Moreover, talking with them keeps me updated on new things happening in their lives, which strengthens our relationship.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Avoid vague phrases like "that I do usually" and be specific about topics. Use linking words to list topics coherently.

예시: I usually chat about what I have been doing recently, such as my work, relationships, and hobbies. These topics help us stay connected and share our experiences.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and sentence structures. Also, use linking words like "because" and "which" properly to connect ideas. Try to express your ideas more naturally.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to get to know them deeply. This kind of conversation is more meaningful, which strengthens our friendship.

제안: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good use of examples. However, there are minor grammatical errors such as "kind of interactions" should be "kind of interaction." Also, avoid repeating phrases like "when I talk to someone in person" after already mentioning face-to-face communication. Try to be concise.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to understand people better through their body language and facial expressions. This kind of interaction feels more personal and effective compared to social media, where messages can sometimes be misunderstood.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use complete sentences and clarify your ideas. For example, explain why differences cause arguments and what you mean by "stand on the other side." Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions and ways of thinking. However, I believe it's important to be honest and also try to understand their point of view.

× Also, taking with them keeps me updated on a new new things happening in their lives which strengthens our relationship.

✓ Also, talking with them keeps me updated on new things happening in their lives, which strengthens our relationship.

The phrase 'taking with them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'talking with them'. Also, 'a new new things' is incorrect; it should be 'new things' without the article 'a' and without repetition. Additionally, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses.

× I usually chat about that I do usually and what happened recently and it's especially works, relationships, hobbies, etcetera.

✓ I usually chat about what I usually do and what happened recently, especially work, relationships, hobbies, etcetera.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect word order. 'That I do usually' should be 'what I usually do'. 'It's especially works' is incorrect; it should be 'especially work'. Also, commas are needed to separate ideas clearly.

× I prefer chat with only one friend because it it allows me to know them deeply and conversation will be more deep it which is makes our friendship tight.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it allows me to know them deeply, and the conversation will be deeper, which makes our friendship stronger.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'prefer to chat'. The phrase 'it it' is a repetition error. 'Conversation will be more deep it' is incorrect; it should be 'the conversation will be deeper'. 'Which is makes' is incorrect; it should be 'which makes'. 'Friendship tight' is better expressed as 'friendship stronger'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to understand people better through their body language and facial expressions. This kind of interactions feel more personal and effective compared to social media where messages can sometimes be misunderstood, for example when I talk to someone in person.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to understand people better through their body language and facial expressions. These kinds of interactions feel more personal and effective compared to social media, where messages can sometimes be misunderstood, for example, when I talk to someone in person.

'This kind of interactions' is incorrect; it should be 'These kinds of interactions' to agree in number. A comma is needed after 'social media' and 'for example' to improve clarity.

× Yeah, sometimes I argue with friend because we are different, we have different thoughts and thinking. Sometimes we should be honest, sometimes should be stand on the other side with.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I argue with friends because we are different; we have different thoughts and ways of thinking. Sometimes we should be honest; sometimes we should stand on the other side.

'Argue with friend' should be 'argue with friends' to match plural. 'Different thoughts and thinking' is awkward; 'different thoughts and ways of thinking' is clearer. The phrase 'sometimes should be stand on the other side with' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes we should stand on the other side'. Also, semicolons improve sentence separation.