Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda bazı tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir ifade için cümlenizi sadeleştirin ve duyguları ifade ederken daha net olun. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlamak için uygun bağlaçlar kullanın.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends online because it's convenient. However, I prefer talking on the phone since it's easier to understand their emotions through their voice, which chatting doesn't convey well.

제안: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar ve belirsiz ifadeler var. Daha spesifik ve net olun. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha iyi bağlamak için uygun bağlaçlar kullanın ve gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının.

예시: I usually chat with my friends in WhatsApp groups where we discuss various topics. For example, we plan our weekend activities, talk about our friends, and share interesting stories.

제안: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar mevcut. Daha akıcı ve doğru cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, 'enjoyful' yerine daha uygun kelimeler kullanın ve cümleleri bağlamak için bağlaçlar ekleyin.

예시: It depends on the topic. If the conversation is private, I prefer chatting with one friend. However, for general topics, I enjoy chatting in groups because it's more fun to interact with multiple people.

제안: Cümlenizde anlam karışıklığı ve tekrarlar var. 'Talents' kelimesi yanlış kullanılmış. Daha net ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve bağlaçlarla akıcılık sağlayın.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can hear their tone of voice and see their facial expressions, which helps to understand their emotions better than chatting online.

제안: Cümleniz karışık ve tekrarlar içeriyor. Daha açık ve düzenli cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin.

예시: Sometimes, like everyone else, I argue with my friends. However, it doesn't happen often because I believe it's normal to have disagreements occasionally.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it's a good way to communicate on online, but I think it's better to talk with phones because you can know their emotions in emotions in phone well but you can't know if their emotions in chat.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it's a good way to communicate online, but I think it's better to talk on the phone because you can understand their emotions on the phone well but you can't know their emotions in chat.

'Communicate on online' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'communicate online'. Also, 'talk with phones' should be 'talk on the phone' because we use 'on the phone' to describe phone conversations. Additionally, 'know their emotions in emotions in phone' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'understand their emotions on the phone'. Finally, 'if their emotions in chat' should be 'their emotions in chat' without 'if'. These are preposition and phrase usage errors.

× Uh, I usually chat on WhatsApp in a group because, uh, in Group sheds and there are lots of topics.

✓ Uh, I usually chat on WhatsApp in a group because, uh, in group chats there are lots of topics.

The phrase 'Group sheds' is incorrect; it should be 'group chats'. This is a vocabulary and preposition usage error.

× You can chat, uh, like we organize what we are going to do in weekends or we can talk about, uh, girls, we can talk about our other friends and we usually talking groups.

✓ You can chat, uh, like we organize what we are going to do on weekends or we can talk about, uh, girls, we can talk about our other friends and we usually talk in groups.

'In weekends' should be 'on weekends' (preposition error). 'We usually talking groups' is incorrect; it should be 'we usually talk in groups' to use the correct verb form and preposition.

× It's depends on the topic.

✓ It depends on the topic.

'It's' is a contraction of 'it is', but here the verb should be 'depends' without 'is'. The correct subject-verb agreement is 'It depends'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× But if it's not private, uh, I prefer talking, uh, sorry, chatting in groups because, well, it's uh, more enjoyful to talk with multiple peoples.

✓ But if it's not private, uh, I prefer chatting in groups because, well, it's uh, more enjoyable to talk with multiple people.

'Enjoyful' is not a correct English word; the correct adjective is 'enjoyable'. Also, 'multiple peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is already plural and does not take 's'. These are adjective and plural noun errors.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it's better to hear their talents and you can see they see their face instead of chatting.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it's better to hear their tones and you can see their face instead of chatting.

'Hear their talents' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'hear their tones' (referring to voice tone). Also, 'you can see they see their face' is incorrect; it should be 'you can see their face'. These are vocabulary and pronoun errors.

× In chatting you can't hear their tones. MMM good. Or you can't see their face so you can't know their emotions.

✓ When chatting, you can't hear their tones or see their face, so you can't know their emotions.

The phrase 'In chatting' is awkward; 'When chatting' is better. Also, combining sentences improves clarity. This is a sentence structure and preposition usage issue.

× Sometimes like every other people I argue with my friends but I don't think it's much than any other P people.

✓ Sometimes, like every other person, I argue with my friends but I don't think it's more than any other people.

'Every other people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; it should be 'every other person'. Also, 'much than' should be 'more than' for countable comparisons. These are singular/plural and comparative errors.