Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、"thrilled"は少し強すぎる感情表現で、より適切な語彙を選ぶと良いでしょう。また、"that time I spend with my friends"の表現は冗長なので簡潔にすると効果的です。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because spending time with them makes me feel relaxed and happy.

제안: 文法の誤りと不明瞭な表現が多いです。特に"we we usually loving other boy"は意味が伝わりにくいので、正しい文法と具体的な内容で話す練習をしましょう。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about love, family, and our daily lives. We often discuss our feelings about relationships and share personal experiences.

제안: "really elect"は意味が不明瞭で、適切な語彙を使う必要があります。また、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現を避け、より明確に理由を述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I prefer talking to one friend rather than a group because I can discuss serious topics more deeply, which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

제안: 全体的に良いですが、"have a communication"は不自然なので"communicate"に直しましょう。また、"show them clearly of my feelings"は"express my feelings clearly"の方が自然です。

예시: I prefer to communicate with others in person rather than online because I can see their expressions and express my feelings clearly.

제안: "a honest person"は"an honest person"が正しいです。また、"talk about everything"は具体性に欠けるため、もう少し具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: To be honest, I sometimes argue with my friends because I am an honest person. I like to have open and sincere conversations with them about various topics.

× Yes, I really adore having a conversation with my friends because that time I spend with my friends makes me feel, umm, comfortable and thrilled.

✓ Yes, I really adore having conversations with my friends because the time I spend with them makes me feel, umm, comfortable and thrilled.

The phrase 'having a conversation' should be pluralized to 'having conversations' to match the general activity described. Also, 'that time I spend with my friends' is better expressed as 'the time I spend with them' for naturalness and to avoid repetition.

× I often talk with my friends about love, our family and daily lives especially we talk about love because we we usually loving other boy and.

✓ I often talk with my friends about love, our families, and daily lives, especially about love because we usually like other boys.

The word 'family' should be pluralized to 'families' to match the plural subject 'friends'. The phrase 'we we usually loving other boy and' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'we usually like other boys' to use the correct verb form and plural noun.

× I like talking to only one person more than a lot of groups because I can talk about more serious topic and deeply, uh, things, so it makes me feel more comfortable and, uh, really elect.

✓ I like talking to only one person more than to large groups because I can talk about more serious topics and deep things, so it makes me feel more comfortable and, uh, really happy.

The phrase 'more serious topic' should be plural 'more serious topics' to agree with 'talk about'. 'Deeply' is an adverb but should be the adjective 'deep' to modify 'things'. The word 'elect' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'happy' or 'pleasant'.

× I would rather have a communication with others in person than through the Internet because I can see the expressions and uh, I can show them clearly of my feelings.

✓ I would rather have communication with others in person than through the Internet because I can see their expressions and clearly show them my feelings.

The phrase 'a communication' is incorrect; 'communication' is an uncountable noun and should not have an article. 'See the expressions' should be 'see their expressions' for clarity. 'Show them clearly of my feelings' is incorrect; it should be 'clearly show them my feelings'.

× To be honest, I argue with my friends from time to time because I am a honest person. Also, I would like to talk with my friends, uh, honestly and uh, I want them to talk about everything.

✓ To be honest, I argue with my friends from time to time because I am an honest person. Also, I would like to talk with my friends honestly, and I want them to talk about everything.

The article 'a' before 'honest' is incorrect because 'honest' starts with a vowel sound; it should be 'an honest person'. The phrase 'talk with my friends, uh, honestly and uh, I want them' should be connected properly with a comma and conjunction for better sentence structure.