Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ tự nhiên nhưng có nhiều từ thừa và lặp lại như "uh", "umm" và "about" không cần thiết. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day because it helps strengthen our relationships. We usually talk about social media trends and share interesting stories from school.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại thông tin đã nói trước đó và chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như chia động từ cho đúng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh sử dụng từ không cần thiết như "uh", "umm".

예시: Usually, we discuss social media topics, breaking news, or share interesting stories about our classmates. These conversations help us stay connected and informed.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ không đúng (như "tasked UH", "charged", "relive UH in abundance") khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện phát âm và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

예시: Honestly, I prefer chatting one-on-one with my best friend because I can express my feelings and opinions openly, which helps me relax after a long day.

제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "umm", "like" và hoàn thành câu cho rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn để thể hiện ý kiến một cách hiệu quả.

예시: Thanks to technology, social media is a convenient way to communicate. However, I prefer face-to-face conversations because I can see emotions and body language, which makes communication more meaningful.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như số nhiều của danh từ và chia động từ đúng. Tránh dùng từ không cần thiết và nói rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

예시: Sometimes we argue because my friends are outspoken and I can be a bit stubborn. However, our disagreements are usually minor, and we make up quickly.

× we often discuss about, umm, social media topics and uh, share some interesting stories from school.

✓ we often discuss, umm, social media topics and uh, share some interesting stories from school.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Saying 'discuss about' is incorrect. The correct form is simply 'discuss' followed by the object.

× we usually discuss about some topic, uh, social media topic or breaking news or sometime we shares, uh, some several interest, uh, interesting stories about our classmate, umm, to his daughter.

✓ we usually discuss some topics, uh, social media topics or breaking news or sometimes we share, uh, several interesting stories about our classmates, umm, to his daughter.

Again, 'discuss' should not be followed by 'about'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Shares' should be 'share' to agree with the plural subject 'we'. 'Some several interest' is incorrect; 'several interesting' is correct. 'Classmate' should be plural 'classmates' to match 'stories'.

× sometime we shares, uh, some several interest, uh, interesting stories about our classmate, umm, to his daughter.

✓ sometimes we share, uh, several interesting stories about our classmates, umm, to his daughter.

'We' is plural, so the verb should be 'share' not 'shares'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× some several interest, uh, interesting stories about our classmate, umm, to his daughter.

✓ several interesting stories about our classmates, umm, to his daughter.

'Interest' should be 'interesting' as an adjective describing 'stories'. 'Classmate' should be plural 'classmates' to match 'stories'.

× some several interest, uh, interesting stories about our classmate, umm, to his daughter.

✓ several interesting stories about our classmates, umm, to his daughter.

'To his daughter' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. Possibly the speaker meant 'with his daughter' or omitted context. Without more context, it's best to remove or clarify this phrase.

× I only tasked UH with just my best friend because when charged with her I can express my feeling and my opinion openly and I think it's really helped me to relive UH in abundance after he had a day.

✓ I only talk with just my best friend because when I talk with her I can express my feelings and my opinions openly and I think it really helps me to relieve stress in abundance after I have had a day.

'Tasked UH' and 'charged with her' are incorrect phrases, likely misheard or misused. They should be 'talk with' or 'chat with'. 'Feeling' and 'opinion' should be plural to match 'my'. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense. 'Relive UH' is incorrect; likely meant 'relieve stress'. 'After he had a day' is unclear; corrected to 'after I have had a day' to make sense.

× social media is the good way and convenient way to socialize with others.

✓ social media is a good and convenient way to socialize with others.

Use 'a' instead of 'the' because 'good and convenient way' is a general statement, not a specific one. Also, 'good way and convenient way' is redundant; better to combine as 'a good and convenient way'.

× I prefer face to face communication because I want to see their umm, like emotions and body language.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I want to see their, umm, emotions and body language.

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and informal here, so it is better omitted.

× my friends is like an outspoken and I just a little bit stubborn.

✓ my friends are outspoken and I am just a little bit stubborn.

'Friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'An outspoken' is incorrect; 'outspoken' is an adjective and does not need an article here. Also, 'I just a little bit stubborn' is missing the verb 'am'.