Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, but you could improve coherence by using linking words to connect ideas more smoothly. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors such as tense consistency.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. For instance, after a long day, talking about our experiences or funny stories always lifts my mood up.

제안: Your answer covers the question well, but watch for small grammatical errors and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, be more specific with examples and avoid redundancy.

예시: I usually chat with friends about various topics, such as our daily lives, hobbies, and current events. For example, we often discuss movies we have recently watched or plans for upcoming events, which helps us connect and share our interests.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but improve grammatical accuracy (e.g., subject-verb agreement) and use linking words to enhance coherence.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because conversations with a single person tend to be more meaningful and allow for a deeper connection and understanding. For example, I can focus better on my thoughts and feelings.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing ('weighty language'). Try to use more appropriate vocabulary and linking words to improve clarity and naturalness.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction. When talking in person, I can read facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand the person better.

제안: Your answer is concise and relevant. To improve, correct minor grammatical errors (e.g., singular/plural agreement) and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better.

× we often discuss about movie we have recently watched or plans for upcoming event.

✓ we often discuss movies we have recently watched or plans for upcoming events.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'movie' and 'event' should be plural to match the context of multiple items.

× we often discuss about movie we have recently watched or plans for upcoming event.

✓ we often discuss movies we have recently watched or plans for upcoming events.

The nouns 'movie' and 'event' should be plural ('movies' and 'events') to agree with the plural context indicated by 'plans' and the general meaning of multiple items.

× These conversations actually connect and share our interests.

✓ These conversations actually help us connect and share our interests.

The original sentence lacks a subject for the verbs 'connect' and 'share'. Adding 'help us' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Conversation with a single person tend to be meaningful and allow for deeper connection and understanding.

✓ Conversation with a single person tends to be meaningful and allows for deeper connection and understanding.

The singular subject 'Conversation' requires singular verbs 'tends' and 'allows' to agree in number.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction.

The phrase 'face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb or adjective.

× When talking in person, I can read facial expressions and weighty language which helps me understand the person better.

✓ When talking in person, I can read facial expressions and body language which helps me understand the person better.

The word 'weighty' is incorrect here; the correct term is 'body language' to refer to nonverbal communication.

× Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topic.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics.

The noun 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to agree with 'different opinions' which implies multiple subjects.