Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some redundancy and unclear phrases such as 'in our chair'. Try to be more concise and clear, avoiding repeated words and filler sounds. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends daily because it helps us share both our joys and challenges. We often discuss our daily routines to stay updated about each other's lives.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and filler words. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, be more specific about the topics you discuss.

예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about our families and work. For example, if someone has had a difficult day, we talk about it, which helps us feel better afterwards.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words and expanding your explanation with specific reasons.

예시: I prefer chatting with a small group of close friends because, as an introvert, I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts with people I trust. This way, conversations are more meaningful and personal.

제안: Good answer with clear reasons. To improve, try to avoid minor grammatical errors and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than social media because it allows for more openness. Moreover, people can see your facial expressions and emotions, which makes the conversation clearer than just texting.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is incomplete and has some grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to make your answer coherent and logical.

예시: Sometimes, arguments among friends are necessary because they can provide insight into problems. Although we may disagree occasionally, these arguments help us understand each other better and resolve issues quickly.

× We share our sorrows and happiness in our chair.

✓ We share our sorrows and happiness in our chat.

The word 'chair' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'chat' which means conversation. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects the meaning of the sentence.

× Uh, we know our everyday routine and we we ask about our everyday routine so we know about each other and.

✓ Uh, we know our everyday routine and we ask about our everyday routine so we know about each other.

The repeated word 'we' is a redundancy and the sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. Removing the extra 'we' and the trailing 'and' corrects the sentence structure.

× If we if we had a hard day, we'll chat about, uh, the day and that sorrows, umm, go away after the chatting.

✓ If we have a hard day, we'll chat about, uh, the day and those sorrows, umm, go away after chatting.

The phrase 'If we if we had' is repetitive and uses past tense 'had' incorrectly for a habitual action; it should be present tense 'have'. Also, 'that sorrows' is incorrect; 'those sorrows' is the correct plural demonstrative pronoun. 'After the chatting' is better as 'after chatting' for natural expression.

× I prefer to chat with the few people who are my close friends.

✓ I prefer to chat with a few people who are my close friends.

The phrase 'the few people' implies a specific small group known to both speaker and listener, but here 'a few people' is more appropriate to indicate some close friends in general. This is a quantifier usage issue related to singular/plural.

× I prefer face to face communication than a social media because you can be more open and you can people can see your face and you can show your emotions and expressions.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication to social media because you can be more open and people can see your face and you can show your emotions and expressions.

The phrase 'prefer ... than' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'prefer ... to'. Also, 'a social media' is incorrect because 'social media' is uncountable and does not take an article. Hyphenation in 'face-to-face' is standard when used as an adjective.

× Is sometimes there will be a need for argument among friends.

✓ Sometimes there will be a need for an argument among friends.

The sentence starts incorrectly with 'Is sometimes'; it should start with 'Sometimes'. Also, 'argument' is a countable noun here and requires the article 'an'. This corrects sentence structure and article usage.

× Sometimes we don't get well with each other and then we'll have arguments and the next minute.

✓ Sometimes we don't get along well with each other and then we'll have arguments, and the next minute...

The phrase 'get well with each other' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'get along well with each other'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding an ellipsis indicates continuation. The comma before 'and' improves sentence flow.