Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的原因，但句子结构不够自然，存在语法错误和冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me happy and helps us understand each other better by sharing new ideas.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，内容重复且缺乏具体细节。建议使用更简洁的句子，明确区分话题，并提供具体例子。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about our studies, like sharing tips to improve, and also about our daily lives, such as our favorite hobbies and activities.

제안: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但有少量语法错误和表达不够流畅。建议注意单复数形式和句子连贯性。

예시: I prefer chatting with a group because I can hear different opinions, but sometimes I feel more comfortable talking to one close friend, especially when meeting new people.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，影响理解。建议简化表达，使用完整句子，并具体说明原因。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's emotions clearly, which makes the conversation friendlier and easier to understand.

제안: 回答内容完整且表达清晰，但有小的语法错误。建议注意主谓一致和时态使用，使表达更准确。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, I think it's normal since it helps us understand each other better and strengthens our friendship.

× I like chatting with my friends because I think it is not only can make me very happy but also we can talk about some of the things that we other don't know and we can improve our thinking or also we can improve our understand with each other.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I think it can not only make me very happy but also we can talk about some things that others don't know and we can improve our thinking or also we can improve our understanding with each other.

句子中“it is not only can make me very happy”结构不正确，情态动词“can”不能和“is”连用，应改为“it can not only make me very happy”。此外，“we other don't know”中的“other”用法错误，应为“others”。“improve our understand”中的“understand”应为名词“understanding”。

× I like chatting with my friends because I think it is not only can make me very happy but also we can talk about some of the things that we other don't know and we can improve our thinking or also we can improve our understand with each other.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I think it can not only make me very happy but also we can talk about some things that others don't know and we can improve our thinking or also we can improve our understanding with each other.

“some of the things”中“things”复数正确，但“we other don't know”中的“other”应为复数形式“others”，表示其他人。

× I like chatting with my friends because I think it is not only can make me very happy but also we can talk about some of the things that we other don't know and we can improve our thinking or also we can improve our understand with each other.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I think it can not only make me very happy but also we can talk about some things that others don't know and we can improve our thinking or also we can improve our understanding of each other.

“improve our understand with each other”中“understand”应为名词“understanding”，且搭配介词应为“understanding of each other”，表示“相互理解”。

× On the one hand, I chat with my friend about maybe some of the things that we study, and on the other hand, we usually chat about our daily life, our things we like favorite, such as, uh, on the one hand about the study, we talk about how to let our study more good and about our daily life, we talk about what we are favorite.

✓ On the one hand, I chat with my friends about some of the things that we study, and on the other hand, we usually chat about our daily life and the things we like. For example, on the one hand about study, we talk about how to improve our study, and about our daily life, we talk about what we like.

“my friend”应为复数“my friends”，因为后文提到“we”。“our things we like favorite”结构混乱，应简化为“the things we like”。“how to let our study more good”表达不正确，应改为“how to improve our study”。“what we are favorite”应为“what we like”。

× I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to discuss a wider range of topics and hear different opinions. However, sometimes I feel more comfortable talking to just one close friend, especially when meeting new peoples make me feel a bit confused or shy.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to discuss a wider range of topics and hear different opinions. However, sometimes I feel more comfortable talking to just one close friend, especially when meeting new people makes me feel a bit confused or shy.

“new peoples”中“peoples”是“people”的复数形式，通常“people”本身就是复数，且此处应使用“people”而非“peoples”。动词“make”应与主语“meeting new people”保持单数一致，改为“makes”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it can not only see other people's emotions to our other face and also I think it's more friendly and we can talk more clearly.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it can not only show other people's emotions on our faces but also I think it's friendlier and we can talk more clearly.

“see other people's emotions to our other face”表达不正确，应改为“show other people's emotions on our faces”。“more friendly”应为比较级“friendlier”。

× Sometimes when we have a view social media talk, maybe we can't understand a lot about other people's meaning and.

✓ Sometimes when we have a video social media talk, maybe we can't understand a lot about other people's meaning.

“a view social media talk”表达不正确，应为“a video social media talk”或“a video call on social media”。句子末尾多余的“and”应去掉。

× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friend because we have different opinions on certain topics. However, I think it is quite normal as it help us understand each other better and improve our friendship.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions on certain topics. However, I think it is quite normal as it helps us understand each other better and improve our friendship.

“my friend”应为复数“my friends”，因为通常争论可能发生在多个朋友之间。动词“help”应与主语“it”保持单数一致，改为“helps”。