Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes, I'm personally very enjoying chatting with my friends and our topic that usually covers very broad range from personal life to recent movies, music, exhibitions and things that we care about. Uh, through chatting with them, I can definitely relax my, uh, pressure and also feel connected in some.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
So a topic actually covers a very broad range, umm, the first thing definitely about personal life from the workspace to uh, personal relationship with other friends and the lovers. And also we very enjoy sharing the latest trends in the markets from the movie to the music, which.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
I personally enjoys chatting with a large group of people 'cause I very enjoying the feeling of having the complex of opinions. So you have only talking to one person, the feeling will be more like 1 being the listener, another one being the speaker. But if you are talking to a lot of people, we can feel more connected.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
So I definitely enjoying chatting with people face to face more 'cause it will enable me to sense the facial communication of the person and having more instance and natural communication rather than guessing through bunch of emojis that sending over and the whole feeling is better.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
Yes I would say most of the time I'm not that come person that who enjoys arguing but I stand for the fact. So for example when they are totally going on the wrong Rd. I was just stating my .111 time again just in order to ask them to follow my right guidance.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，存在冗余和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更地道的表达方式。
예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We talk about a wide range of topics, from personal life to recent movies and music. Chatting helps me relax and feel connected with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答内容不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯的逻辑和具体细节。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并补充完整信息。
예시: We usually chat about many topics, such as our personal lives, work, relationships, and the latest trends in movies and music. These conversations keep us updated and close.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 70.0제안: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并简化句子结构。
예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy hearing different opinions. Talking to many people makes me feel more connected than just talking to one person.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 65.0제안: 表达不够流畅，存在语法和用词错误。建议使用更简洁的句子，注意时态和词汇的准确性。
예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and have more natural conversations, unlike guessing emotions through emojis online.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答含糊且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简化表达，明确观点，并避免使用不准确的词汇。
예시: I don't usually enjoy arguing with friends, but I will express my opinion firmly if I think they are wrong, to help guide them in the right direction.
문법
× Yes, I'm personally very enjoying chatting with my friends and our topic that usually covers very broad range from personal life to recent movies, music, exhibitions and things that we care about.
✓ Yes, I'm personally very enjoy chatting with my friends and our topics usually cover a very broad range from personal life to recent movies, music, exhibitions and things that we care about.
动词后面不应该用进行时形式“enjoying”，而应该用动词原形“enjoy”来表达习惯性动作。
× our topic that usually covers very broad range from personal life to recent movies, music, exhibitions and things that we care about.
✓ our topics usually cover a very broad range from personal life to recent movies, music, exhibitions and things that we care about.
“topic”应使用复数形式“topics”，因为后面描述的是多个话题，且谓语动词应与复数主语一致。
× I personally enjoys chatting with a large group of people 'cause I very enjoying the feeling of having the complex of opinions.
✓ I personally enjoy chatting with a large group of people 'cause I very enjoy the feeling of having a complex of opinions.
“enjoys”应改为“enjoy”以符合主语“I”，且“very enjoying”应改为“very enjoy”，动词不应使用进行时。
× having the complex of opinions.
✓ having a complex of opinions.
“complex”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示“一种复杂的意见集合”，而不是特指某个“the complex”。
× So I definitely enjoying chatting with people face to face more 'cause it will enable me to sense the facial communication of the person and having more instance and natural communication rather than guessing through bunch of emojis that sending over and the whole feeling is better.
✓ So I definitely enjoy chatting with people face to face more 'cause it enables me to sense the facial communication of the person and have more instant and natural communication rather than guessing through a bunch of emojis that are sent over and the whole feeling is better.
“definitely enjoying”应改为“definitely enjoy”，动词不应使用进行时；“will enable”改为一般现在时“enables”以符合习惯表达；“having”改为“have”；“instance”应为“instant”；“bunch of emojis that sending over”应改为“a bunch of emojis that are sent over”，补充冠词和被动语态。
× Yes I would say most of the time I'm not that come person that who enjoys arguing but I stand for the fact.
✓ Yes, I would say most of the time I'm not that kind of person who enjoys arguing but I stand for the fact.
“come person”应为“kind of person”，表达正确的短语。
× So for example when they are totally going on the wrong Rd. I was just stating my .111 time again just in order to ask them to follow my right guidance.
✓ So for example, when they are totally going on the wrong road, I just state my point time and again just in order to ask them to follow my right guidance.
“was just stating”改为“一般现在时”以符合习惯表达；“.111 time”应为“time and again”；“Rd.”应写全为“road”。
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