Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и завершённым. Избегайте заполнителей (например, "Umm", "uh uh") и старайтесь выражать мысли ясно и связно.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts comfortably.

제안: Используйте правильные грамматические формы и связывающие слова для улучшения связности. Например, исправьте "I usually talking" на "I usually talk".

예시: I usually talk with my friends about many things, especially our daily lives and any problems we might have. Additionally, we enjoy discussing films and TV series because we all like watching them together. For example, last week we discussed a new series that we found really interesting.

제안: Избегайте повторений и грамматических ошибок. Используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: Honestly, I prefer conversations with a group of people because we can hear new ideas and opinions, and sometimes it's a great way to make new friends.

제안: Исправьте неправильные выражения и улучшите структуру предложения для ясности. Например, "facial experiences" заменить на "facial expressions".

예시: I prefer to communicate face to face because when talking in person, you can read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstandings. For example, discussing important matters is usually clearer and more personal when done face to face.

제안: Избегайте повторений и улучшайте грамматическую структуру. Сделайте ответ более связным и логичным.

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends jokingly because it's fun and interesting, but usually, arguments can turn into conflicts, so I prefer to agree on most things.

× I think I usually talking with friends about many things, especially about our daily lives and any problems we might have.

✓ I think I usually talk with friends about many things, especially about our daily lives and any problems we might have.

The verb 'talking' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. After modal or auxiliary verbs like 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Correct usage is 'usually talk'.

× Honestly, I prefer conversation with a group of people because we we hear new ideas and opinions and sometimes it's a great way for make friends.

✓ Honestly, I prefer conversation with a group of people because we hear new ideas and opinions and sometimes it's a great way to make friends.

The pronoun 'we' is repeated unnecessarily ('we we'). Also, the phrase 'for make friends' is incorrect; it should be 'to make friends' because 'to' is the correct preposition before the verb in infinitive form.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because when talking in person you can read body language and facial experiences, which helps avoid misunderstanding.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when talking in person you can read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstanding.

The word 'experiences' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'expressions' when referring to facial movements that convey emotions.

× For example, discussing important measures is usually clear more personal when done face to face.

✓ For example, discussing important matters is usually clearer and more personal when done face to face.

The adverbs and adjectives are misplaced. 'Clear' should be in comparative form 'clearer' and 'more personal' should be connected properly. Also, 'measures' is incorrect; 'matters' fits better in this context.

× Sometimes I I argue with my friends as a joke because it's fun and interesting, but usually it can turn into conflicts and I prefer I agree with other things.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends as a joke because it's fun and interesting, but usually it can turn into conflicts and I prefer to agree with other things.

The pronoun 'I' is repeated unnecessarily ('I I'). Also, 'prefer I agree' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer to agree' using the infinitive form after 'prefer'.