Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Umm, actually I don't like chatting with my friends, I prefer chatting with my mother and my husband. Umm, it's more important to me because, umm, now, uh, in the past I have many.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
Uh, I usually chat with my mother and uh, I talk about my, umm, general life and also if I have a problem I also, umm, talk.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
I prefer to chat with, uh, only one friend. Uh, it's more, uh, convenient to my, uh, personal umm, to share my personal thought, uh, if uh, we have, umm, celebrate, uh, any.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
I prefer to communicate, uh, face to face, but uh, nowadays social media is uh, developing yearly. That's why, umm, usually people use uh, to communicate with each other, uh, via social.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
Yes, uh, I had argued with my best friends, umm, for five years ago ago because uh, uh, because uh, he always, uh, his life, always secretly, but my.
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총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 50.0제안: Та илүү тодорхой, шууд хариулт өгч, илүү цэвэрхэн, утга агуулгатай хариулт бичээрэй. Илүү холбогч үг ашиглаж, хариултыг 3-5 өгүүлбэрээр хязгаарлах хэрэгтэй.
예시: I don't like chatting with my friends very much. Instead, I prefer talking with my mother and husband because our conversations are more meaningful and personal.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 55.0제안: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой болгохын тулд холбогч үг ашиглаарай. Мөн ярианы сэдвээ тодорхой, дэлгэрэнгүй тайлбарлаарай.
예시: I usually chat with my mother about my daily life. Also, if I have any problems, I discuss them with her to get advice.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 60.0제안: Хариултаа илүү цэгцтэй, ойлгомжтой болгохын тулд илүү тодорхой өгүүлбэр ашиглаарай. Холбогч үг ашиглаж, санаагаа илүү сайн дамжуулна уу.
예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it is easier to share my personal thoughts. Also, we can celebrate special occasions together more closely.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 65.0제안: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд утга агуулгатай болгоорой. Холбогч үг ашиглаж, хоёр санааг логик холбоотой илэрхийлээрэй.
예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal. However, social media is becoming popular nowadays, so many people use it to stay connected.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 40.0제안: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, ойлгомжтой, бүрэн өгүүлбэрээр илэрхийлээрэй. Үг давтах, дүүрэн үгсийг багасгаж, санаагаа тодорхой илэрхийлээрэй.
예시: Yes, I argued with my best friend five years ago because he was very secretive about his life, which made me feel uncomfortable.
문법
× now, uh, in the past I have many.
✓ now, uh, in the past I had many.
The verb tense is incorrect here; 'have' should be in the past tense 'had' to match 'in the past'. This is a past tense issue but also relates to singular/plural agreement with 'many' implying plural objects, so 'had many' is correct.
× I had argued with my best friends, umm, for five years ago ago because uh, uh, because uh, he always, uh, his life, always secretly, but my.
✓ I argued with my best friend five years ago because he always kept his life secret, but my...
The phrase 'had argued' is incorrect here because 'five years ago' specifies a definite past time, so simple past 'argued' is appropriate. Also, 'friends' should be singular 'friend' to match 'he'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar up to that point.
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