Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use the present tense consistently and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, make your answer more natural by using a complete sentence and adding a reason. For example, say 'Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is an easy way to stay connected.'

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is an easy way to stay connected and share our daily experiences.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Avoid unclear phrases like 'Delhi, PA in my friend'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, 'Usually, my friends and I chat about social news, gossip, and the latest clothing trends.'

예시: Usually, my friends and I chat about social news, gossip, and the latest clothing trends that are popular among young people.

제안: Try to start with a clear topic sentence and avoid fragmented sentences. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to connect ideas. For example, 'It depends on the situation. If it is a discussion, I prefer chatting with a group, but if I want a personal conversation, I chat with one friend.'

예시: It depends on the situation. If it is a discussion, I prefer chatting with a group, but if I want a personal conversation, I chat with one friend.

제안: Use complete sentences and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to make your answer coherent. For example, 'I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media. Because some of my friends live abroad, I use social media to stay in touch. However, with close friends nearby, I prefer face-to-face conversations.'

예시: I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media. Because some of my friends live abroad, I use social media to stay in touch. However, with close friends nearby, I prefer face-to-face conversations.

제안: Make your answer more natural by using complete sentences and linking ideas. For example, 'Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about certain topics because we have different opinions and views.'

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about certain topics because we have different opinions and views, but it helps us understand each other better.

× Yes, I enjoyed chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends.

The question is in present tense 'Do you like', so the answer should also be in present tense. 'Enjoyed' is past tense, which is inconsistent here. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context.

× I uh, it's easy way to connected with my friends.

✓ I think it's an easy way to connect with my friends.

The phrase 'easy way to connected' is incorrect; 'connected' should be the base form 'connect' after 'to'. Also, the article 'an' is needed before 'easy way'.

× Delhi, PA in my friend chat about the society's news and gossips and some kind of trends of clothes.

✓ In Delhi, my friends and I chat about society's news, gossip, and some kinds of clothing trends.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Delhi, PA in my friend chat' is confusing; it should be 'In Delhi, my friends and I chat'. 'Gossips' should be 'gossip' as an uncountable noun. 'Some kind of trends of clothes' is better as 'some kinds of clothing trends'.

× Is dependent on the person If.

✓ It depends on the person.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. The correct form is 'It depends on the person.'

× If it's a discussion, then I prefer a group of people.

✓ If it's a discussion, then I prefer a group of people.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× If I want to talk with their one person, then I only chat with that person.

✓ If I want to talk with just one person, then I only chat with that person.

'Their one person' is incorrect; it should be 'just one person' to indicate a single individual.

× I prefer both ways, communicate face to face or via social media because some my friends are living in other countries then I prefer social media.

✓ I prefer both ways: communicating face to face or via social media because some of my friends live in other countries, so I prefer social media.

'Communicate' should be in gerund form 'communicating' after 'prefer both ways'. 'Some my friends' should be 'some of my friends'. 'Are living' can be simplified to 'live'. 'Then' should be 'so' to indicate cause and effect.

× If a person close to me then I shows something face to face.

✓ If a person is close to me, then I show something face to face.

Missing verb 'is' after 'person'. 'Shows' should be 'show' to agree with the subject 'I'.

× Yes, something I argue with my friends about certain topics.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about certain topics.

'Something' is incorrect here; it should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× We have different opinions and views which is why we argue.

✓ We have different opinions and views, which is why we argue.

A comma is needed before 'which' to correctly link the clauses.