Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用正确的表达方式，同时避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel happier.

제안: 回答内容较为简单，缺少完整句子和连接词，建议用完整句子表达并适当扩展内容。

예시: We usually talk about our future jobs and sports like fishing, golf, football, basketball, and table tennis.

제안: 回答不连贯且表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并明确表达自己的观点。

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it gives me a chance to meet new friends and strengthen existing friendships.

제안: 表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有误，建议注意时态和句子结构，使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal, although many people use social media nowadays.

제안: 句子结构不完整且语法错误，建议用完整句子表达经历和态度。

예시: I have argued with my friends before, but I always apologize to keep our friendship strong.

× Oh that's my favorite. By chatting with my friends I'd love to reduce my stress and make your mind and improve get happiness.

✓ Oh, that's my favorite. By chatting with my friends, I'd love to reduce my stress, clear my mind, and improve my happiness.

原句中“make your mind”和“improve get happiness”表达不正确，应该使用固定搭配“clear my mind”和“improve my happiness”。此外，句子缺少逗号，影响理解。建议使用正确的动词短语和标点符号。

× Future jobs uh, fishing, golf, football, basketball and table tennis.

✓ We usually chat about future jobs, fishing, golf, football, basketball, and table tennis.

原句缺少主语和谓语，属于句子结构错误。应补充完整句子，使表达完整清晰。

× Although it's a little difficult, but I think it's a chance to approach others and. Get my friendship with friendship well.

✓ Although it's a little difficult, I think it's a chance to approach others and build good friendships.

原句中“Although”和“but”重复使用，且句子断裂，导致结构混乱。应去掉“but”，合并句子，并用正确表达替换“Get my friendship with friendship well”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face. Now more people like to communicate on social media, but I think it's a little boring because it didn't see people at a place.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. Nowadays, more people like to communicate on social media, but I think it's a little boring because you can't see people in person.

原句中“didn't see people at a place”表达不当，应该用“you can't see people in person”来表达面对面交流的缺失。

× Previous time I had it but I know always apologized to my friend to maintain my friendship.

✓ Previously, I had arguments, but I always apologized to my friend to maintain our friendship.

原句“Previous time I had it”时态和表达不正确，应使用过去时“Previously, I had arguments”。另外，“know”应为“always”，表达习惯动作。