Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте повторений и неясных выражений, таких как "the something else". Используйте связующие слова для логичности и конкретизируйте детали.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share our thoughts and secrets comfortably. We often discuss various interesting topics, which makes our conversations meaningful and enjoyable.

제안: Ответ должен быть более конкретным и связным. Избегайте неопределённых выражений, таких как "something else". Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями.

예시: Usually, we talk about our homework or plans for the day. For example, if we are going shopping, we discuss what items to buy and help each other choose the best options.

제안: Ответ должен быть более грамматически правильным и чётким. Избегайте повторений и используйте связующие слова для логичности. Уточните причины предпочтений.

예시: I prefer chatting with both groups and individuals. However, if the group is not very close to me, I feel more comfortable discussing things one-on-one with a close friend.

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторений и уточните причины предпочтений, используя подходящие связующие слова.

예시: I prefer both methods, but I like face-to-face conversations with close friends because they feel more personal. However, with acquaintances, I find social media more comfortable since I can avoid feeling shy or embarrassed.

제안: Ответ должен быть более чётким и грамматически правильным. Избегайте тавтологии и используйте связующие слова для логичности. Приведите конкретный пример.

예시: Yes, sometimes my friends and I argue, which is normal in friendships. For instance, we might disagree when our opinions on a topic differ, but we always resolve it respectfully.

× We can talk about anything and we can discuss some topics that we are interesting and that we can share each other our secrets.

✓ We can talk about anything and discuss some topics that interest us and share our secrets with each other.

The phrase 'that we are interesting' is incorrect because 'interesting' is an adjective describing something that causes interest, not a feeling. The correct form is 'that interest us' to express that the topics are interesting to us. Also, 'share each other our secrets' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'share our secrets with each other' to properly use the reciprocal pronoun.

× And it's really comfortable and meaningful for me to share our secrets and the something else.

✓ And it's really comfortable and meaningful for me to share our secrets and something else.

The phrase 'the something else' is incorrect because 'something' is an indefinite pronoun and should not be preceded by the definite article 'the'. Removing 'the' corrects the phrase.

× If we are going to shopping, we can talk about what we are going to buy or what to choose.

✓ If we are going shopping, we can talk about what we are going to buy or what to choose.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to' when indicating an activity. The correct phrase is 'going shopping'.

× Actually I prefer to chat both of them, but if the group of people not that close to me, I prefer to chat or discuss something with only one friend to be comfortable when I'm talking or discussing something.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with both of them, but if the group of people is not that close to me, I prefer to chat or discuss something with only one friend to be comfortable when I'm talking or discussing something.

The phrase 'prefer to chat both of them' is missing the preposition 'with'. Also, 'if the group of people not that close to me' lacks the verb 'is' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× But if I'm talking with not that close friends I prefer via social media because it's a little bit comfortable to talk because I'm embarrassing or shy talking face to face.

✓ But if I'm talking with friends who are not that close, I prefer via social media because it's a little bit more comfortable to talk since I'm embarrassed or shy talking face to face.

The phrase 'with not that close friends' is incorrect; it should be 'with friends who are not that close' to correctly modify 'friends'. Also, 'I'm embarrassing' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'embarrassed' to describe the speaker's feeling.

× Yes, sometimes we argue with my friends and it's normal between friends.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends and it's normal between friends.

The phrase 'we argue with my friends' is inconsistent because 'we' includes the speaker and others, but 'my friends' refers only to the speaker's friends. Changing 'we' to 'I' aligns the subject and object correctly.

× We can argue about anything, for example if our thoughts think if we think differently.

✓ We can argue about anything, for example, if our thoughts differ or if we think differently.

The phrase 'if our thoughts think if we think differently' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replacing it with 'if our thoughts differ or if we think differently' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.