Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的原因，但语法和用词上有些错误，比如“make make”重复且时态不正确。建议注意动词的单复数和时态一致，同时避免重复。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because we share similar interests. Talking with them makes me feel relaxed.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词形式不正确（sharing应为share），以及重复词汇（we we）。建议注意动词时态和避免重复，同时可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: My friends and I are all fans of video games, so we often share our achievements and exchange information to improve our gaming skills.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如动词单复数不一致（make应为makes），以及表达不完整（'And behave well'不清楚）。建议注意语法和表达完整性，避免含糊不清。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because talking to a large group makes me feel stressed and I can't concentrate well.

제안: 回答不完整，句子末尾突然中断，且有语法错误（makes me really relax应为makes me really relaxed）。建议完整表达观点，注意语法和句子结构。

예시: I prefer to communicate via social media because it offers many emojis that help me express my feelings, and this kind of communication makes me feel relaxed.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇（hurt our hurt our），用词不当（confliction应为conflict），且句子未完成。建议注意词汇准确性，避免重复，并确保句子完整。

예시: I seldom argue with my friends because I think it can hurt our relationship. If I feel a conflict is coming, I prefer to apologize to maintain harmony.

× Chatting with them make make me feel relaxing.

✓ Chatting with them makes me feel relaxed.

主语是单数形式的动名词短语，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes。并且形容词relaxing应改为形容词relaxed来表达感受。

× my friends are having similar interests with me.

✓ my friends have similar interests to me.

动词have后面搭配介词to表示兴趣相似，不能用with。

× Me and my friends are all fans of video games, so we often umm sharing our achievements in games and exchange some information so that we we can improve our gaming skills.

✓ My friends and I are all fans of video games, so we often share our achievements in games and exchange some information so that we can improve our gaming skills.

主语中人称代词应使用主格I而非宾格me，且顺序通常将自己放在最后。动词时态应统一，使用一般现在时share和exchange。

× so we often umm sharing our achievements in games and exchange some information so that we we can improve our gaming skills.

✓ so we often share our achievements in games and exchange some information so that we can improve our gaming skills.

副词often后应接动词原形，不能用动名词sharing。

× chat to chat with a large group of people make me feel really stressed and I can't concentration.

✓ chatting with a large group of people makes me feel really stressed and I can't concentrate.

主语chatting是单数，谓语动词应用makes。动词concentration应改为动词concentrate。

× I prefer to communicate on social media with my friends because on social media there are plenty of emojis which I can use to express my feelings and this kind of communication makes me really relax and I think it's.

✓ I prefer to communicate with my friends on social media because there are plenty of emojis which I can use to express my feelings, and this kind of communication makes me really relaxed.

communicate后应接介词with表示与谁交流，on social media位置调整更自然。relax应改为形容词relaxed。

× I seldom argue with my friends because I think this will hurt our hurt our relationship.

✓ I seldom argue with my friends because I think this will hurt our relationship.

重复了hurt our，应删除多余部分。

× I prefer to communicate on social media with my friends because on social media there are plenty of emojis which I can use to express my feelings and this kind of communication makes me really relax and I think it's.

✓ I prefer to communicate with my friends on social media because there are plenty of emojis which I can use to express my feelings, and this kind of communication makes me really relaxed.

makes后应接形容词relaxed，表示使我感到放松，而非动词原形relax。

× And behave well.

✓ And behave well.（句子不完整，建议补充主语和谓语）

该句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整，建议补充完整句子。

× I would like to apologize to my friends and.

✓ I would like to apologize to my friends.

句子末尾and后无内容，导致句子不完整，应删除and或补充完整内容。