Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“love to chatting”应为“love chatting”，“when I facing a trouble”应为“when I am facing trouble”。此外，表达的意思不够清晰，最后一句“their attitude will give me stress”与前文情境不符，容易引起误解。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，表达时保持简洁且逻辑清晰。

예시: Yes, I love chatting with my friends, especially when I am facing difficulties and feeling down. Talking to them helps me feel better and reduces my stress.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但表达略显冗长且有语法错误，如“tiny thing every day”应为“small things every day”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时注意词汇的准确使用。

예시: Well, we usually chat about small things like what we eat or drink every day, and sometimes we have deep conversations about our future careers and life plans.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“prefer to chatting”应为“prefer chatting”，且句子结构不够流畅。建议简化句子，使用正确的动词形式，并用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because we can have deeper conversations and build a stronger connection.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法错误，如“talk each other”应为“talk to each other”，句子末尾“what why we say that”不通顺。建议简化表达，注意语法和逻辑连贯。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because we can see each other's emotions, which helps us understand each other better.

제안: 回答较为自然，但“different attitudes to the same thing”表达稍显生硬，建议使用更地道的表达方式，如“different opinions”。同时，“most time”应为“most of the time”。

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions about something, but most of the time we get along well.

× Yeah I I love to chatting with my friends especially when I facing a trouble and the mood going down.

✓ Yeah I love chatting with my friends especially when I am facing trouble and my mood is going down.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词的-ing形式。这里love后面接动名词chatting，而不是to chatting。并且动词短语中缺少be动词，应该是I am facing trouble，my mood is going down。

× Yeah I I love to chatting with my friends especially when I facing a trouble and the mood going down.

✓ Yeah I love chatting with my friends especially when I am facing trouble and my mood is going down.

英文中不可数名词和可数名词单复数形式要正确。这里trouble是不可数名词，不需要加冠词a。

× I had to talk to my friend and their attitude will give me stress.

✓ I have to talk to my friends and their attitude will give me stress.

主语和代词要保持一致。这里talk to my friend和their attitude不匹配，应该是talk to my friends。

× I had to talk to my friend and their attitude will give me stress.

✓ I have to talk to my friends and their attitude gives me stress.

描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，had to是过去时，应该用have to。态度是单数，动词用第三人称单数形式gives。

× Well, generally we talk about everything from the tiny thing every day, what we eat, what we drink, to the deep conversation about the future career or future life.

✓ Well, generally we talk about everything from the tiny things every day, what we eat, what we drink, to deep conversations about future careers or future life.

名词单复数要正确。tiny thing应为tiny things，deep conversation应为deep conversations，future career应为future careers。

× Well, I prefer to chatting with one friend so that I we can make a deeper conversation between US and build a more stable connection with each other.

✓ Well, I prefer chatting with one friend so that we can have a deeper conversation between us and build a more stable connection with each other.

prefer后面接动名词形式chatting，而不是to chatting。make a conversation不自然，通常用have a conversation。US应小写us。

× Well, I prefer to chatting with one friend so that I we can make a deeper conversation between US and build a more stable connection with each other.

✓ Well, I prefer chatting with one friend so that we can have a deeper conversation between us and build a more stable connection with each other.

代词使用错误，I we不应同时出现，应为we。US应为小写us。

× Well, in my opinion, I prefer to communicate face to face because when we talk each other in real life, we can see the emotion on their face so we can understand what why we say that.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I prefer to communicate face to face because when we talk to each other in real life, we can see the emotion on their faces so we can understand why we say that.

动词talk后应接介词to，talk each other应为talk to each other。emotion是可数名词，复数形式emotions更合适。what why重复，应去掉what。

× Well, sometimes I argue with friends when we have different attitudes to the same thing, but most time we don't argue with each other.

✓ Well, sometimes I argue with friends when we have different attitudes to the same thing, but most of the time we don't argue with each other.

短语most time应为most of the time，表示大多数时候。