Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and clear my mind. Whenever I have a problem, I talk to them, and they often help me find solutions.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and confusing phrases. Focus on directly answering the question with clear and specific details. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are coherent.

예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about personal experiences and share jokes to lighten the mood. For example, I often tell funny stories from my daily life.

제안: Your answer is good but contains minor grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I enjoy both chatting with a group and one-on-one conversations. Group chats are lively because everyone shares their daily experiences, but one-on-one talks allow for deeper and more personal discussions.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use proper sentence structure, and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe body language, which helps understanding. However, social media is useful for staying in touch with friends who live far away, like those in Gujarat and Rawalpindi.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words and grammatical mistakes. Try to speak more fluently by avoiding fillers and use correct grammar. Also, provide a clearer explanation with linking words.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when they have bad habits. I try to convince them to change because I care about their well-being.

× I do like chatting with friend because he tells me to relax my mind and even if there is any problem I chat my with.

✓ I do like chatting with friends because they tell me to relax my mind and even if there is any problem I chat with them.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with more than one person. Also, 'chat my with' is incorrect; it should be 'chat with them' to correctly use the pronoun referring to friends.

× I chat to my friend and he tell me the solution of the problem.

✓ I chat with my friend and he tells me the solution to the problem.

The verb 'tell' should be in the third person singular form 'tells' to agree with the singular subject 'he'. Also, 'chat to' is less common than 'chat with', and 'solution of the problem' is better expressed as 'solution to the problem'.

× I chat to my friend and he tell me the solution of the problem.

✓ I chat with my friend and he tells me the solution to the problem.

The preposition 'to' after 'chat' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with'. Also, 'solution of' should be 'solution to'.

× I usually chat about about a specific joke like when big girlfriend is the only one person you can share your personal life and I share.

✓ I usually chat about a specific joke, like when a big girlfriend is the only person you can share your personal life with, and I share.

The phrase 'about about' is a repetition error. 'Big girlfriend' is unclear but assuming it means 'best girlfriend' or 'close friend', 'a' is needed before 'big girlfriend'. Also, 'only one person' should be 'only person' for natural expression.

× I usually chat about about a specific joke like when big girlfriend is the only one person you can share your personal life and I share.

✓ I usually chat about a specific joke, like when a close friend is the only person you can share your personal life with, and I share.

The preposition 'with' is needed after 'share your personal life' to complete the phrase correctly.

× Group checks are fun because everyone share their daily experience which makes the conversation lively and interesting.

✓ Group chats are fun because everyone shares their daily experiences which make the conversation lively and interesting.

'Checks' should be 'chats'. 'Everyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'shares'. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'their'. Also, 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural 'experiences'.

× Group checks are fun because everyone share their daily experience which makes the conversation lively and interesting.

✓ Group chats are fun because everyone shares their daily experiences which make the conversation lively and interesting.

The verb 'share' should be 'shares' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'.

× I also appreciate one-on-one conversation because they allow for deeper and more personal discussion.

✓ I also appreciate one-on-one conversations because they allow for deeper and more personal discussions.

'Conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match 'they'. Also, 'discussion' should be plural 'discussions' to agree with 'deeper and more personal'.

× Freely speaking are you prefer put communication because whenever we are face to face then we we we thought their body language and even more when in the social media is useful for long distance and I will communicate with my friends that they are live in Gujarat and involve Pindi and we are chatting via social media.

✓ Frankly speaking, I prefer face-to-face communication because when we are face to face, we can observe body language more clearly. Social media is useful for long distances; I communicate with my friends who live in Gujarat and Rawalpindi via social media.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Are you prefer put communication' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer face-to-face communication'. 'We we we thought their body language' is unclear; it should be 'we can observe body language'. 'Involve Pindi' is likely a mishearing of 'Rawalpindi'. The sentence is broken into clearer parts for better understanding.

× Yes, I argue with my friend in of specific topic and uh, because, uh, when they had a bad habit, then I argue with him and ask him to remove this habit.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friend on specific topics because when he has a bad habit, I argue with him and ask him to change it.

'In of specific topic' is incorrect; it should be 'on specific topics'. 'They had' should be 'he has' to agree with singular 'my friend' and present tense. 'Remove this habit' is better expressed as 'change it' for naturalness.