Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, and avoid redundancy. For example, mention what you enjoy about chatting with friends and keep the sentences simple and natural.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially in the mornings. We often talk about our daily lives and share interesting stories.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid vague or confusing phrases and focus on specific topics you discuss with friends.

예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about work or college assignments. Sometimes, we also talk about other people's lives, like sharing gossip, but mostly we focus on our own experiences.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better linking. Use linking words like 'on the other hand' to contrast your preferences. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

예시: I don't mind chatting with groups because it's fun and lively. On the other hand, talking to one friend feels more personal and calm. Therefore, I think it's important to have both types of conversations.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'I don't really mention media'.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication when my friends are nearby because it's more personal. However, for long-distance friends, I use social media to stay updated and maintain our connection throughout the day.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or confusing phrases like 'I really I give it French'. Focus on directly answering the question and provide reasons or examples. Keep sentences simple and coherent.

예시: No, I don't usually argue with my friends. We try to keep each other updated about our lives, which helps us maintain a strong and positive relationship.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends and morning right now where we talk about people and we gossip.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends in the morning right now where we talk about people and gossip.

The phrase 'and morning right now' is incorrect in this context. It should be 'in the morning' to indicate the time when chatting happens. Also, 'we gossip' is better without 'we' repeated before it for smoother sentence flow.

× My issue needs chat about work or college work with my friends.

✓ I usually chat about work or college work with my friends.

The phrase 'My issue needs chat' is incorrect and unclear. The correct pronoun and verb usage is 'I usually chat' to express the habitual action of chatting about work.

× Sometimes he can be girls gossip where we judge and then.

✓ Sometimes there can be girls' gossip where we judge and so on.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect here; 'there' is appropriate to indicate existence. Also, 'girls gossip' should be possessive 'girls' gossip' to show the gossip belongs to girls. The sentence was incomplete, so 'and then' is replaced with 'and so on' for clarity.

× I don't mind any of them groups, more of fun and chaotic vibes.

✓ I don't mind any of those groups; they have more fun and chaotic vibes.

The phrase 'any of them groups' is incorrect; 'any of those groups' is correct for plural reference. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Meanwhile with one person I share more of closeness and deep seekers and deep calm.

✓ Meanwhile, with one person, I share more closeness and deep calm.

The phrase 'deep seekers' is unclear and likely incorrect. Removing it clarifies the meaning. Also, 'more of closeness' is better as 'more closeness' for correct adjective use.

× They still talks so I think it's important to have both kind of people.

✓ They still talk, so I think it's important to have both kinds of people.

The subject 'They' is plural, so the verb should be 'talk' not 'talks'. Also, 'both kind' should be 'both kinds' to agree in number.

× If my friends are nearby that I prefer face to face but if it is long distance then I don't really mention media.

✓ If my friends are nearby, I prefer face-to-face communication, but if it is long distance, then I don't really use social media.

The phrase 'mention media' is incorrect; 'use social media' is appropriate. Also, commas are added for clarity, and 'face to face' is hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× As long we try to take communicated throughout the day, keep updating with each other of our lives.

✓ As long as we try to communicate throughout the day and keep updating each other about our lives.

The phrase 'try to take communicated' is incorrect; it should be 'try to communicate'. Also, 'keep updating with each other of our lives' is corrected to 'keep updating each other about our lives' for proper preposition use.

× Let us know where we can validate to each other that is most important thing.

✓ Let us know where we can validate each other; that is the most important thing.

The phrase 'validate to each other' is incorrect; 'validate each other' is correct. Also, 'that is most important thing' needs the definite article 'the' before 'most important thing'.

× No, not really. I really I give it French.

✓ No, not really. I really give it a chance.

The phrase 'I really I give it French' is incorrect and unclear. It seems to be a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence 'I really give it a chance' fits the context of not arguing.

× I think we should do to keep keep each other updated about our lives and wherever, which helps maintain a strong connection despite the distance.

✓ I think we should keep each other updated about our lives wherever we are, which helps maintain a strong connection despite the distance.

The phrase 'we should do to keep keep' is incorrect; it should be 'we should keep'. Also, 'and wherever' is corrected to 'wherever we are' for proper conjunction and clarity.