Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и связным. Избегайте неясных слов и выражений, таких как "Ice twice" и "Hmm". Лучше прямо выразить предпочтение встречам в реальной жизни, используя простые и понятные фразы.

예시: I don't really like chatting online; I prefer meeting my friends in person because it's more enjoyable and meaningful.

제안: Ответ содержит полезную информацию, но структура и связность страдают. Используйте связующие слова для логического перехода и избегайте повторов. Также старайтесь формулировать предложения более грамотно.

예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about our day and school experiences. Moreover, if someone doesn't understand a topic, we help each other by explaining it, which is very helpful.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует четко выразить предпочтение и использовать правильные слова и грамматические конструкции. Избегайте лишних слов и обеспечьте связность.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it's more exciting to share interesting moments together.

제안: Ответ содержит хорошую идею, но выражена она нечетко. Используйте более точные слова и правильные выражения, например, "facial expressions" вместо "action mimics". Также улучшите структуру предложения.

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it's important to see people's facial expressions, which helps me understand their feelings better than social media.

제안: Ответ содержит много ошибок и нечетких выражений. Следует использовать более простые и понятные фразы, а также улучшить грамматику и связность.

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but I try to explain my opinion clearly so they can understand me. I think it's important to share our feelings and opinions honestly.

× Not very, I more prefer to meet in real life. Ice twice. Hmm.

✓ Not really, I prefer to meet in real life more.

The adverb 'more' is incorrectly placed before the verb 'prefer'. In English, 'prefer' is usually followed by the object or infinitive, and 'more' should come after the verb or be part of the phrase 'prefer to'. Also, 'Not very' is incomplete and should be 'Not really' to express dislike properly.

× Actually, usually I chat with my friends about our day, our experiences at school, and we can ask some topic which we don't understand, which we didn't understand, so someone can explain it. It's very good to.

✓ Actually, I usually chat with my friends about our day, our experiences at school, and we can ask about some topics which we don't understand, so someone can explain them. It's very good too.

The phrase 'ask some topic' is incorrect; it should be 'ask about some topics'. Also, 'which we don't understand, which we didn't understand' is redundant; using present tense 'don't understand' is sufficient. 'It's very good to' is incomplete and should be 'It's very good too' to mean 'also'.

× From my perspective, I definitely choose the child of with my company of friends. It's very exciting to call and or chatting or sharing our interesting times.

✓ From my perspective, I definitely choose to hang out with my group of friends. It's very exciting to call, chat, or share our interesting times.

The phrase 'choose the child of with my company of friends' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'choose to hang out with my group of friends'. Also, 'call and or chatting' is incorrect; parallel structure requires 'call, chat, or share'.

× So I absolutely prefer to communicate face to face than in social media because it's paramount to me to see people face and people's action mimics, which are very good to know what they're saying about you.

✓ So I absolutely prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because it's important for me to see people's faces and their facial expressions, which help me understand what they're saying about you.

The phrase 'than in social media' should be 'rather than via social media'. 'People's action mimics' is incorrect; the correct term is 'facial expressions'. Also, 'very good to know' is awkward; 'help me understand' is clearer.

× For some extent I argue with them, but in some I disagree and I say it's thoroughly that I disagree. May maybe we could change it so they also understand my opinion. So it's the best to share our feelings, our opinion to them.

✓ To some extent, I argue with them, but sometimes I just disagree and say that I disagree firmly. Maybe we could change their minds so they also understand my opinion. So it's best to share our feelings and opinions with them.

'For some extent' should be 'To some extent'. 'In some' is incomplete; 'sometimes' is correct. 'It's thoroughly that I disagree' is incorrect; 'say that I disagree firmly' is better. 'May maybe' is redundant; 'Maybe' suffices. 'It's the best to share' should be 'It's best to share'. 'Our opinion to them' should be 'our opinions with them'.