Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends, especially when I'm in a good mood and have something interesting to share. However, if I'm feeling down, I prefer to be alone and not talk to anyone.

제안: 回答中有较多犹豫词和语法错误，建议减少填充词，使用更准确的表达，并提供更具体的细节来丰富内容。

예시: We usually chat about our common interests, such as sports. For example, my friends and I are big NBA fans, so we often discuss recent games and favorite players.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并避免使用模糊词汇。

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I don't want many people to know my thoughts or news. Also, I only talk to close friends, not fake ones.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并清晰表达原因。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows us to express our feelings clearly. Otherwise, communicating through social media might cause misunderstandings.

제안: 回答不完整且语法混乱，建议组织完整句子，避免重复，清楚表达观点并举例说明。

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about our common interests. For example, we are both big NBA fans but support different teams, so we often debate about players and games.

× Yes, I like to chatting with my friends especially I have a in a especially I'm in a good mood and I have something good for them to tell them.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends especially when I'm in a good mood and I have something good to tell them.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词的-ing形式，而不是不定式to + 动词原形。这里应该用like chatting而不是like to chatting。

× I like to chatting with my friends especially I have a in a especially I'm in a good mood and I have something good for them to tell them.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends especially when I'm in a good mood and I have something good to tell them.

句中缺少连接词，应该用when引导时间状语从句，表示“当我心情好时”。

× If I'm not feeling good, I don't want talk with anyone and I just want to be alone.

✓ If I'm not feeling good, I don't want to talk with anyone and I just want to be alone.

情态动词后面应该接动词原形或不定式，这里缺少to，正确用法是want to talk。

× I usually talk about my friend with NBA because we are a big fan of it and we like to talk about the game, the players.

✓ I usually talk about NBA with my friends because we are big fans of it and we like to talk about the game and the players.

friend应为复数friends，fan应为复数fans，因为主语是we，表示复数。

× I usually talk about my friend with NBA because we are a big fan of it and we like to talk about the game, the players.

✓ I usually talk about NBA with my friends because we are big fans of it and we like to talk about the game and the players.

介词搭配错误，应该说talk about NBA with friends，而不是talk about my friend with NBA。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't want to a lot of people know what I what I'm thinking or the news.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't want a lot of people to know what I'm thinking or the news.

a lot of people是复数，后面动词要用不定式to know，且句中缺少to。

× I don't want to a lot of people know what I what I'm thinking or the news.

✓ I don't want a lot of people to know what I'm thinking or the news.

want后面接不定式to know，不能直接接动词原形。

× I also only talk to the real friends, not that fake one or something else.

✓ I also only talk to real friends, not fake ones or something else.

friends和ones应保持复数形式，表示泛指多个朋友。

× I prefer communicate face to face because we can express our meaning, uh, through face to face Exactly.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because we can express our meaning exactly through face to face.

prefer后面应接不定式to communicate，且through face to face表达不自然，应放在句尾。

× I prefer communicate face to face because we can express our meaning, uh, through face to face Exactly.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because we can express our meaning exactly through face to face.

副词exactly应放在动词express之后，修饰表达的方式。

× Otherwise, uh, they will uh, your friends will misunderstanding you and umm, they can help you, uh.

✓ Otherwise, your friends will misunderstand you and they can help you.

will后面应接动词原形，misunderstanding是动名词形式，错误。

× Yeah, sometimes, I mean, we'll we will argue with uh, I will argue with friend on our common interests.

✓ Yeah, sometimes, I mean, we will argue with friends on our common interests.

friend应为复数friends，表示泛指多个朋友。

× Like we are big. We are both big fan of NBA.

✓ Like we are big. We are both big fans of NBA.

fan应为复数fans，因为主语是we，表示复数。

× So we have different team and different players.

✓ So we have different teams and different players.

team应为复数teams，与different搭配表示多个不同的队伍。