Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有拼写错误。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法和拼写。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because we can share different opinions and relieve stress from our daily academic and work life.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，表达混乱，缺少连贯性。建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about books because I love reading. We discuss the characters and their actions, sharing different opinions on the story.

제안: 回答不完整且含糊，语法错误较多，表达不清。建议明确表达自己的偏好，并用完整句子说明理由。

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can hear different perspectives and learn new ideas from them.

제안: 回答未完成且表达不流畅，有重复和语法错误。建议完整表达观点，避免重复，并使用连贯的句子。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because online chatting can be risky due to fake identities, which may lead to fraud or cheating.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议用完整句子表达观点，并说明原因。

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends because everyone has different opinions, and I respect that. Instead, I try to understand their views.

× Yes, I do Chatting with my friends can share distinct opinions with each other.

✓ Yes, I do. Chatting with my friends allows us to share distinct opinions with each other.

动词后面接动名词时，需注意句子结构。原句中缺少主语和谓语，且动词形式不正确。应使用动名词作主语，并用正确的谓语动词。

× Additionally, it can release the pressures and turns during our daily academic and professional lives.

✓ Additionally, it can relieve the pressure and stress during our daily academic and professional lives.

pressure和stress通常不可数，不能用复数形式。turns用法不当，应改为stress或类似词。

× I'm a lover of book.

✓ I'm a lover of books.

book应使用复数形式books，因为表示喜欢书籍的总称。

× We can share our thoughts about 1 atoms or one topic and we can share with each other different opinions on to the character or the things she has to do.

✓ We can share our thoughts about one topic and share different opinions about the character or the things she has to do.

原句中“1 atoms”不合适，应改为“one topic”。此外，句子结构混乱，需简化表达。

× Yes, I think there's your, uh, mixed thoughts between the groups and and you can and from different respectives you can regain some distinct or umm umm umm further.

✓ Yes, I think there are mixed thoughts among the groups, and from different perspectives, you can gain some distinct or further insights.

原句结构混乱，语法错误较多。应调整句子结构，使表达清晰。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think umm chatting online someone could use a fake identity which can cause some some damage like frauding and cheating and and I believe that face to face talking could.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think chatting online, someone could use a fake identity which can cause some damage like fraud and cheating, and I believe that face-to-face talking is safer.

“face to face”应连写为“face-to-face”，frauding应改为fraud，句子末尾不完整，需补充完整。

× No, because I think different people has their different, umm respects.

✓ No, because I think different people have their different respects.

主语different people是复数，谓语动词应使用have而非has。

× We can't argue with that. To persuade them to align with us the most or extended we can do is to.

✓ We can't argue about that. The most we can do is to persuade them to align with us.

argue后应接about而非with，句子末尾不完整，需补充完整。