Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve natural phrasing. For example, instead of 'I can understand better about their feelings and emotions', say 'I can better understand their feelings and emotions'. Also, try to keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me learn their opinions and stay updated on their lives. For instance, regular conversations allow me to better understand their feelings and offer support when needed.

제안: Your answer is relevant and structured, but try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and improve linking for coherence. Also, avoid repeating words like 'work' twice in one sentence. Use linking words such as 'whereas' to contrast ideas.

예시: It depends on the friend. For example, with my colleagues, we usually discuss projects and workplace news, whereas with close friends, we prefer to talk about our emotions and opinions on social issues.

제안: Your answer is good but can be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and use more natural expressions such as 'each has its own advantages'. Also, replace 'special issue' with 'particular topic' for clarity.

예시: I think each has its own advantages. For example, chatting with a group offers diverse perspectives on a particular topic, while talking one-on-one allows for deeper discussion.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting plural forms and using linking words. For example, say 'body language' instead of 'body languages' and 'tone of voice' instead of 'voice tone'. Use 'because' to link reasons smoothly.

예시: I prefer chatting face-to-face because it has more benefits. For example, you can observe body language and tone of voice, which helps the conversation flow better.

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and precise. Replace 'special topic' with 'particular topic' and 'there is a little warning about arguing' with 'it's important to argue respectfully'. Also, avoid repeating 'perspective' twice.

예시: Yes, I believe arguing is a good way to share opinions on a particular topic. However, it's important to argue respectfully because I don't want to fight with my friends over differences.

× I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me to learn about their opinions and be updated about their lives.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me to learn about their opinions and stay updated on their lives.

The phrase 'be updated about their lives' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'updated' in this context is 'on', so it should be 'stay updated on their lives'. Also, 'stay updated' is more natural than 'be updated' here.

× I can understand better about their feelings and emotions and I can provide support if they need.

✓ I can understand their feelings and emotions better and I can provide support if they need it.

The verb 'understand' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'if they need' is incomplete; it should be 'if they need it' to clarify what is needed.

× we usually talk about projects and news at work.

✓ we usually talk about projects and news related to work.

The phrase 'news at work' is less precise. Using 'news related to work' is clearer and more appropriate.

× you can use a variety of perspectives about the special issue.

✓ you can use a variety of perspectives on the special issue.

The correct preposition to use with 'perspectives' is 'on', not 'about'.

× you can see their body languages and notice their voice tone and you can get along better in the conversation.

✓ you can see their body language and notice their tone of voice and you can get along better in the conversation.

'Body language' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, the correct phrase is 'tone of voice' rather than 'voice tone'.