Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'we are phase two'. Make your answer more natural and clear by directly stating your preference and giving a brief reason.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends through social media because it helps me stay connected even when we're apart.

제안: Avoid filler words and unclear expressions. Use linking words to organize your answer and provide specific examples of topics you discuss.

예시: It usually depends on the situation; however, we often talk about our weekend plans, recent events, or daily updates to keep each other informed.

제안: Try to reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more concise.

예시: It depends on the situation. For example, I prefer group chats when planning weekends with friends, but I chat one-on-one when I want to share something personal.

제안: Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Use clear linking words to compare your preferences and provide reasons.

예시: I prefer social media to communicate with long-distance friends because it's convenient. However, for local friends, I prefer face-to-face conversations since they allow better emotional connection.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide reasons why arguing can be positive.

예시: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes because it helps us understand each other's viewpoints better. Arguing doesn't mean we are enemies; it just shows we have different opinions, and we usually reach an agreement in the end.

× Yes, I enjoy uh, chatting with my friends, uh, via social, uh, media or we are phase two, Phase 2.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends via social media or WeChat Phase 2.

The phrase 'we are phase two, Phase 2' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. 'WeChat Phase 2' is probably intended. Also, unnecessary fillers like 'uh' should be omitted for clarity. The verb 'enjoy' correctly takes the '-ing' form 'chatting', so no change there.

× It uh, usually depends on the situation, Umm, but most of the we share weekends plan or maybe we share incident happen something or maybe a daily update you basically.

✓ It usually depends on the situation, but mostly we share weekend plans, incidents that happened, or daily updates basically.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Most of the we share weekends plan' is ungrammatical; it should be 'mostly we share weekend plans'. 'Incident happen something' is incorrect; it should be 'incidents that happened'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Umm again it's depends on the situation.

✓ Umm, again it depends on the situation.

The phrase 'it's depends' is incorrect because 'depends' is a verb and should not be preceded by 'it is'. The correct form is 'it depends'. This is a subject-verb agreement and modal verb usage issue.

× If uh we all the friends make a weekends plan so I prefer a group of people in the chat or if I have to share with only one person then I'm go with the only by one of the friend.

✓ If all the friends make a weekend plan, I prefer a group chat; or if I have to share with only one person, then I go with just one friend.

'Weekends plan' should be 'weekend plan' (singular) as it refers to a plan for the weekend. 'I'm go with the only by one of the friend' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I go with just one friend'. Also, 'a group of people in the chat' is better expressed as 'a group chat'. These corrections address singular/plural and sentence structure errors.

× If I had to talk a long distance friend, I prefer social media because it's convenient and easy to talk with them.

✓ If I have to talk to a long-distance friend, I prefer social media because it's convenient and easy to talk with them.

The phrase 'If I had to talk' suggests a past conditional, but the intended meaning is a present conditional, so 'have' is correct. Also, 'talk a long distance friend' is missing the preposition 'to' and 'long distance' should be hyphenated as 'long-distance'. This corrects modal verb usage and preposition errors.

× If my if I have to talk with them, my local friend, I prefer face to face.

✓ If I have to talk with my local friend, I prefer face-to-face communication.

The phrase 'If my if I have to talk with them' is redundant and confusing; corrected to 'If I have to talk with my local friend'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb. Also, 'communication' is added for clarity.

× Yes a lot. I agree with my friends this is the best way to know each other and know other other person's point of view and arguing.

✓ Yes, a lot. I agree with my friends; this is the best way to get to know each other and understand the other person's point of view through arguing.

The phrase 'know other other person's point of view and arguing' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'understand the other person's point of view through arguing'. Also, punctuation is added for clarity. This addresses pronoun use and sentence structure.

× That doesn't mean it's a enemy it's just we are disagree on something and we know each other's standpoint and we conclude at one point.

✓ That doesn't mean it's an enemy; it just means we disagree on something, and we know each other's standpoint and eventually reach a conclusion.

'It's a enemy' should be 'it's an enemy' due to vowel sound. 'We are disagree' is incorrect; it should be 'we disagree'. The sentence is run-on and needs proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'Conclude at one point' is better expressed as 'eventually reach a conclusion'. This corrects article use, verb tense, and conjunction errors.