Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use more natural expressions and correct grammar, such as 'I feel very happy and it helps me relieve stress.'

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel very happy and helps me relieve stress.

제안: Focus on clearer sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the study topics.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about my studies because they are very intelligent and often share useful knowledge that helps me understand the subjects better.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific examples.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group because it provides more knowledge about society and current events happening around us, which makes the conversation more interesting.

제안: Good answer with clear reasons and examples. To improve, correct minor grammar errors and use smoother linking phrases.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to see my friends' emotions and feelings better. For example, facial expressions and tone of voice make conversations more meaningful. Although social media is convenient, I find personal communication more effective.

제안: Work on subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of arguments.

예시: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better. For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often leads to interesting discussions.

× Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because when I when I chatting with my friends I feel very over the moon and relieve my stress.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because when I chat with my friends I feel very over the moon and relieve my stress.

The phrase 'when I chatting' is incorrect because after 'when I' a base verb or correct tense form should be used. The correct form is 'when I chat' to maintain proper verb usage and tense consistency.

× I usually chat with my friends about my study purpose because it my friends are very intelligent and he gave and he gave me lot more knowledge about the studies so I usually chat with my friends for study purpose.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my study purposes because my friends are very intelligent and they give me a lot more knowledge about the studies, so I usually chat with my friends for study purposes.

The phrase 'study purpose' should be pluralized to 'study purposes' to match the context. Also, 'he gave' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural, so 'they give' is appropriate. 'Lot more knowledge' needs an article 'a' before 'lot'. These corrections ensure subject-verb agreement and proper pluralization.

× I prefer to chat with the group because it it provides so many knowledge about our society and other useful things which was happened on surroundings.

✓ I prefer to chat with the group because it provides so much knowledge about our society and other useful things which have happened in the surroundings.

'So many knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and should be used with 'so much'. Also, 'which was happened' is incorrect; the correct form is 'which have happened' to match plural subject and proper tense. 'On surroundings' should be 'in the surroundings' for correct preposition usage.

× I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because it allow me to see their emotion and feelings better.

✓ I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because it allows me to see their emotions and feelings better.

The verb 'allow' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'allows'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'feelings' and the context.

× Although social media is convenient, I find in personal communication more personal and effective.

✓ Although social media is convenient, I find personal communication more personal and effective.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect in this sentence. Removing 'in' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when he have different opinions on important topic.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when they have different opinions on important topics.

'He have' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and the verb 'have' agrees with 'they'. Also, 'important topic' should be plural 'important topics' to match the context of multiple opinions.

× For example, we might debates about movies or current events, which often leads to interesting discussions.

✓ For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often leads to interesting discussions.

After modal verb 'might', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'debates' should be 'debate'.