Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, instead of repeating 'because' and starting sentences with 'Because', combine ideas smoothly. Also, use articles correctly and improve grammar.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it is more convenient than phone calls. Unlike calls, which require a quiet place, chatting can be done anywhere, making it very flexible.

제안: Avoid repeating phrases like 'Well, this is a very interesting question.' Also, try to make your answer more concise and clear by directly answering the question and using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: We usually chat about our study schedules and plan meetings when we want to meet outside. Additionally, we use chatting to discuss important topics.

제안: Improve grammar and word choice, such as 'Well-being' should be 'Being' and 'create a hustle' could be 'creates confusion'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Being an introvert, I prefer chatting with only one friend because honesty is important to me. Moreover, chatting in groups often creates confusion, making it hard for anyone to listen properly.

제안: Work on subject-verb agreement and word choice, for example, 'depend' should be 'depends', and 'conversate' should be 'communicate'. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow.

예시: It depends on the situation. If a friend is nearby, we prefer face-to-face communication. However, if they live abroad, we communicate through social media apps like Snapchat or Messenger.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'in friends argument is a normal thing'. Use linking words to explain when arguments happen.

예시: Yes, arguments among friends are normal. They usually happen when we share different opinions during discussions.

× chatting is more convenient way than phone call

✓ chatting is a more convenient way than a phone call

The sentence is missing the indefinite articles 'a' before 'more convenient way' and 'phone call'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article. Adding 'a' clarifies the meaning and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× if we have to talk from phone call

✓ if we have to talk on the phone call

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to use with 'talk' and 'phone call' is 'on'. So, 'talk on the phone call' is the proper phrase.

× Because if we have to talk from phone call, we required a peaceful place

✓ Because if we have to talk on the phone call, we require a peaceful place

The verb 'required' is incorrectly used in past tense; it should be present tense 'require' to match the context. Also, 'we' is correct but the verb tense must agree with the present context.

× However, chatting we can do from anywhere

✓ However, we can do chatting from anywhere

The sentence structure is awkward. The subject 'we' should come before the verb 'can do' for correct word order in English.

× We usually talk about our study schedule and whenever we have to meet anywhere outside our home, then we often chat with each other or while having an important discussion

✓ We usually talk about our study schedule, and whenever we have to meet anywhere outside our home, we often chat with each other or have important discussions

The sentence is wordy and has unnecessary conjunctions like 'then' and 'while' that disrupt flow. Simplifying the sentence and removing 'then' and 'while' improves clarity and grammar.

× We prefer chat

✓ We prefer to chat

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to chat' rather than the bare verb 'chat'.

× Well-being an introvert person, I prefer to chat with only one person

✓ Well, being an introvert person, I prefer to chat with only one person

The phrase 'Well-being' is incorrect; it should be 'Well, being' to separate the interjection 'Well' from the participle phrase 'being an introvert person'.

× chatting with a group of people create a hustle and it create a environment

✓ chatting with a group of people creates a hustle and it creates an environment

The subject 'chatting' is singular, so the verb should be 'creates' not 'create'. Also, 'a environment' is incorrect; it should be 'an environment' because 'environment' starts with a vowel sound.

× it create a environment in which nobody is able to listen about anything

✓ it creates an environment in which nobody is able to listen to anything

The verb 'create' should be 'creates' to agree with singular subject. The preposition 'about' is incorrect after 'listen'; the correct preposition is 'to'.

× Well it depend upon the situation

✓ Well, it depends on the situation

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with subject 'it'. Also, the preposition 'upon' is less common; 'on' is preferred here. A comma after 'Well' improves readability.

× If one of my friend is close to me then we prefer to communicate face to face

✓ If one of my friends is close to me, then we prefer to communicate face to face

The phrase 'one of my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my friends' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, a comma after the conditional clause improves clarity.

× But if my friend is out of our nation then we can conversate only through social media or from social media apps like Snapchat or messenger

✓ But if my friend is out of our country, then we can communicate only through social media or social media apps like Snapchat or Messenger

The word 'conversate' is nonstandard; the correct verb is 'communicate' or 'chat'. 'Out of our nation' is better expressed as 'out of our country'. Also, 'from social media apps' is incorrect; 'through' is the correct preposition. Capitalize 'Messenger' as it is a proper noun.

× Yes, definitely in friends argument is a normal thing

✓ Yes, definitely, arguments among friends are a normal thing

The phrase 'in friends argument' is incorrect; it should be 'arguments among friends'. Also, plural 'arguments' fits better here. Commas improve sentence flow.

× However in such kind of situation where we are advised to give our opinions, then there is a situation of argument in between all of the friends

✓ However, in such situations where we are advised to give our opinions, there is often an argument among all the friends

The phrase 'in such kind of situation' is awkward; 'in such situations' is better. The word 'then' is unnecessary and disrupts flow. 'Argument in between all of the friends' should be 'an argument among all the friends'. Commas improve readability.