Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use simpler and more natural expressions. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, say "I enjoy chatting with friends and family because it allows me to express myself."

예시: I enjoy chatting with friends and family because it allows me to express myself and share my thoughts openly.

제안: Improve grammar and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about the topics you discuss.

예시: Most of the time, we talk about our future plans. For example, we discuss our career goals and how to achieve them, which helps us feel more confident about what's ahead.

제안: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing phrases like "solo talking." Use linking words to explain your preferences clearly.

예시: It depends on my mood. Sometimes, I enjoy chatting with a group because I like hearing different opinions. Other times, I prefer talking one-on-one with my best friend for a more personal conversation.

제안: Use correct verb tenses and singular/plural forms. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity and coherence.

예시: I usually prefer face-to-face communication with my close friends and family. However, when I need to speak to a large group, I use platforms like Zoom because they allow me to share my opinions with many people at once.

제안: Use more natural expressions like "I often debate with my friends" and add linking words to show contrast and explanation.

예시: I often debate with my friends, especially when we have different opinions. However, we always do it respectfully and try to understand each other's points of view.

× I like having interpersonal relationship with anybody as I was being regarded as a extrovert.

✓ I like having interpersonal relationships with anybody as I am regarded as an extrovert.

The noun 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because it refers to multiple connections with people. Also, 'a extrovert' is incorrect; it should be 'an extrovert' because 'extrovert' starts with a vowel sound. Additionally, 'was being regarded' is awkward and inconsistent with present context; 'am regarded' is more appropriate.

× I like having interpersonal relationship with anybody as I was being regarded as a extrovert.

✓ I like having interpersonal relationships with anybody as I am regarded as an extrovert.

The article 'a' before 'extrovert' is incorrect because 'extrovert' begins with a vowel sound; it should be 'an extrovert'.

× I like having interpersonal relationship with anybody as I was being regarded as a extrovert.

✓ I like having interpersonal relationships with anybody as I am regarded as an extrovert.

The phrase 'was being regarded' is past continuous tense, but the context suggests a present state; therefore, present simple 'am regarded' is correct.

× It's because it gave me an opportunity to express myself.

✓ It's because it gives me an opportunity to express myself.

The verb 'gave' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a general truth or habitual action, so present tense 'gives' is appropriate.

× Additionally, it give us an insight how to make our future more stronger.

✓ Additionally, it gives us insight into how to make our future stronger.

The verb 'give' should be in third person singular present tense 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'more stronger' is incorrect; 'stronger' alone suffices. The phrase 'insight how' should be 'insight into how'.

× Additionally, it give us an insight how to make our future more stronger.

✓ Additionally, it gives us insight into how to make our future stronger.

The verb 'give' must be conjugated as 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Additionally, it give us an insight how to make our future more stronger.

✓ Additionally, it gives us insight into how to make our future stronger.

The phrase 'insight how' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'insight into how'.

× Additionally, it give us an insight how to make our future more stronger.

✓ Additionally, it gives us insight into how to make our future stronger.

The phrase 'more stronger' is redundant; 'stronger' alone is the correct comparative form.

× Sometimes I love interacting with different people, sometimes I love solo talking.

✓ Sometimes I love interacting with different people; sometimes I love talking solo.

The phrase 'solo talking' is awkward; 'talking solo' is more natural. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× Solo talking means talking with my best friend alone and there are times that I love chatting with different people's most, especially if I'm talking with lots of audience.

✓ Talking solo means talking with my best friend alone, and there are times when I love chatting with different people the most, especially if I'm talking to a large audience.

'Solo talking' is better as 'talking solo'. 'Different people's most' is incorrect; it should be 'different people the most'. 'Talking with lots of audience' should be 'talking to a large audience'.

× It's because it gave me an opportunity to have a lots of audience to express my own opinions, most especially in Group.

✓ It's because it gives me an opportunity to have a large audience to express my own opinions, especially in groups.

'Gave' should be 'gives' for present tense consistency. 'A lots of audience' is incorrect; 'a large audience' is correct. 'Most especially in Group' is awkward; 'especially in groups' is better.

× It's because it gave me an opportunity to have a lots of audience to express my own opinions, most especially in Group.

✓ It's because it gives me an opportunity to have a large audience to express my own opinions, especially in groups.

The verb 'gave' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'gives'.

× Most of the time I keep on debating lots of friends, most especially if we have different opinions in a certain topic.

✓ Most of the time I keep debating with many friends, especially if we have different opinions on a certain topic.

'Keep on debating' is better as 'keep debating'. 'Lots of friends' is informal; 'many friends' is more appropriate. 'Most especially' is redundant; 'especially' suffices. 'In a certain topic' should be 'on a certain topic'.