Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторений и излишних слов. Например, можно сказать: "Yes, I like chatting with friends because it's my favorite way to communicate and I do it every day. It seems to be the most convenient option for me."

예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it's my favorite way to communicate and I do it every day. It seems to be the most convenient option for me.

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также стоит избегать разговорных сокращений, например, "cause" заменить на "because". Например: "I usually chat with my friends about school because many of them are my classmates. We often discuss our homework and tasks we need to complete."

예시: I usually chat with my friends about school because many of them are my classmates. We often discuss our homework and tasks we need to complete.

제안: Ответ хороший, но стоит улучшить грамматику и связность. Например, использовать "does not" вместо "do not" и более естественные выражения. Также можно добавить связующее слово "because". Например: "I prefer chatting with only one friend because it helps me feel more connected and understand their emotions. On the contrary, chatting in a group does not allow me to do that."

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it helps me feel more connected and understand their emotions. On the contrary, chatting in a group does not allow me to do that.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует улучшить структуру и ясность. Например: "I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see people's emotions and talk more directly. Communicating via social media is less exciting and interesting for me."

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see people's emotions and talk more directly. Communicating via social media is less exciting and interesting for me.

제안: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения. Следует сделать его более естественным и лаконичным. Например: "No, I don't argue with my friends. I dislike arguing in general, especially with people I care about, because I don't want to cause conflicts."

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends. I dislike arguing in general, especially with people I care about, because I don't want to cause conflicts.

× Is my favorite one way of communication, so I do that every day.

✓ It is my favorite way of communication, so I do that every day.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' and uses 'one way' incorrectly. The phrase 'one way of communication' should be 'way of communication' or 'one of my favorite ways of communication'. Here, adding 'It is' corrects the sentence structure and subject usage.

× With my friends I usually chat about school cause a lot of my friends are my classmates or just study with me at my school so usually we discuss our homework or just tasks that we need to do.

✓ With my friends, I usually chat about school because a lot of my friends are my classmates or just study with me at my school, so usually we discuss our homework or tasks that we need to do.

The sentence lacks commas for clarity and uses 'cause' informally instead of 'because'. Adding commas improves readability and replacing 'cause' with 'because' is more appropriate in formal speech.

× Chatting with the group, On the contrary, do not allow me to do that.

✓ Chatting with the group, on the contrary, does not allow me to do that.

The subject 'Chatting' is singular, so the verb should be 'does not' instead of 'do not'. Also, 'On' should be lowercase 'on' as it is in the middle of the sentence.

× This way I'm able to see the emotions of human and more directly talk with him or her via social media.

✓ This way I'm able to see the emotions of a person and talk more directly with them face to face. Communicating via social media is not really that exciting or interesting.

'Emotions of human' is incorrect; it should be 'emotions of a person'. Also, 'him or her' can be replaced with the singular 'them' for inclusivity and naturalness. The sentence about social media was awkwardly connected; splitting into two sentences improves clarity.

× ... and more directly talk with him or her via social media.

✓ ... and more directly talk with him or her face to face. Communicating via social media is not really that exciting or interesting.

The original sentence incorrectly suggests talking 'via social media' is more direct, which contradicts the intended meaning. The correction clarifies that face-to-face communication allows more direct interaction, while social media is less engaging.

× ... because my friends are the people who I really like and I don't wish to make fights to fight with them, to fight with them.

✓ ... because my friends are the people whom I really like, and I don't wish to have fights with them.

'Who' should be 'whom' as it is the object of the verb 'like'. The phrase 'make fights to fight with them' is awkward and redundant; 'have fights with them' is more natural and grammatically correct. Also, the repetition 'to fight with them' is unnecessary.