Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes, of course, chatting is really fun. It helps me relax after a long hectic day. And by chatting we can get on well with our friends too.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
Most of the time it's about our daily lives and routines, such as what we did during the day or interesting interesting things we learned. Sometimes we also share our opinions about things with dislike or find frustrating and these conversations are always enjoyable because they have a stay connected.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
Chatting with a group of people will be more suitable for me since there will be a lot of people to discuss. For example, when it comes to a topic, a controversial topic, there will be many opinions for me.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
While face to face will be helpful and enjoyable since we can see each other and see their emotional faces while social media cannot.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
Of course I think that arguing with friends maybe somehow frustrating, but umm, you know, arguments and conflicts are just normal for a better friendship. I think so.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 80.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ và thêm một số chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me unwind after a busy day. Moreover, it strengthens our relationships by allowing us to share our thoughts and experiences.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa.
예시: Usually, we talk about our daily activities and any interesting things we've learned. For instance, last week, I shared a new recipe I tried, and we also discuss topics that frustrate us, which helps us feel connected.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
예시: I prefer chatting in a group because it allows me to hear different perspectives. For example, when discussing controversial topics, having multiple opinions makes the conversation more interesting.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết để làm rõ ý.
예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see facial expressions and emotions, which social media cannot convey effectively.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như 'umm' và 'you know'. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể.
예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, which can be frustrating. However, I believe that disagreements are normal and can help strengthen our friendship by resolving misunderstandings.
문법
× Sometimes we also share our opinions about things with dislike or find frustrating and these conversations are always enjoyable because they have a stay connected.
✓ Sometimes we also share our opinions about things we dislike or find frustrating, and these conversations are always enjoyable because they help us stay connected.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'with dislike' instead of 'we dislike' and 'have a stay connected' which is ungrammatical. The pronoun 'we' is needed to correctly refer to the subject's feelings, and 'help us stay connected' is the correct phrase to express maintaining connection.
× Chatting with a group of people will be more suitable for me since there will be a lot of people to discuss.
✓ Chatting with a group of people is more suitable for me since there will be a lot of people to discuss with.
The use of 'will be' is unnecessary here because the preference is a general statement, so present simple 'is' is appropriate. Also, 'people to discuss' is incomplete; it should be 'people to discuss with' to correctly use the preposition with 'discuss'.
× Chatting with a group of people will be more suitable for me since there will be a lot of people to discuss.
✓ Chatting with a group of people is more suitable for me since there will be a lot of people to discuss with.
The verb 'discuss' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate the people involved in the discussion. Omitting 'with' leads to an incomplete and incorrect sentence.
× While face to face will be helpful and enjoyable since we can see each other and see their emotional faces while social media cannot.
✓ Face-to-face communication is helpful and enjoyable since we can see each other and observe their emotional expressions, whereas social media cannot provide this.
The original sentence is a fragment and uses 'while' twice confusingly. Rewriting it as a complete sentence with proper conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
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