Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ "chatting" và "friends" quá nhiều lần. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it gives us a chance to share our daily experiences and support each other. For instance, we often discuss interesting events that happened during the week, which helps me feel more connected to them.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp như "improve improve" và "support each other career". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

예시: I usually talk with my friends about our daily lives, like what happened during the day or any interesting events. Sometimes, we also exchange ideas and tips to improve our job skills because we want to support each other's careers.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít như "a good friends" nên là "a good friend" hoặc "good friends". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp trong câu cuối.

예시: I prefer chatting with good friends because we can share different ideas and experiences. For example, discussing our daily lives helps me gain new perspectives and feel more connected to them.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa như "We have a voice, misunderstandings, voicemail". Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to understand the other person's body language better. For example, when we talk in person, we can avoid misunderstandings and build a stronger connection.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ thừa như "uh" và lặp từ "my my". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends because sometimes we have misunderstandings during conversations. However, we usually resolve these issues quickly, which helps me feel more confident and connected with them.

× Honestly, I prefer chatting with a good friends because we can share different ideas and experience.

✓ Honestly, I prefer chatting with good friends because we can share different ideas and experiences.

The phrase 'a good friends' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the plural subject 'friends'.

× From my perspective, I prefer to communicate face to face because it allow me to understanding the other person body language.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to understand the other person's body language.

The verb 'allow' should be in third person singular form 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Understanding' should be the base form 'understand' after 'allows me to'. Also, 'other person body language' needs a possessive apostrophe: 'other person's body language'.

× Sometime we also exchange ideas and tips to improve improve our job skill because we want to support each other career.

✓ Sometimes we also exchange ideas and tips to improve our job skills because we want to support each other's careers.

The word 'Sometime' should be plural 'Sometimes'. 'Job skill' should be plural 'job skills' to match the context. 'Each other career' should be possessive 'each other's careers' to indicate mutual support.

× For example, we often talk about our daily life will help me learn new perspective and feel more connected to them.

✓ For example, we often talk about our daily life, which helps me learn new perspectives and feel more connected to them.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper connection. Adding 'which helps' correctly links the clauses. 'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to match the context.

× From my perspective, I prefer to communicate face to face because it allow me to understanding the other person body language.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to understand the other person's body language.

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Understanding' should be 'understand' after 'allows me to'. Also, 'other person' should be possessive 'other person's'.

× Honestly, I occasionally argue with my my friends because uh, we have trouble with the conversation but we resolve the problem quickly and it help me feel confident and connected.

✓ Honestly, I occasionally argue with my friends because we have trouble with the conversation, but we resolve the problem quickly and it helps me feel confident and connected.

The phrase 'my my friends' has a repeated word 'my'. 'It help' should be 'it helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'.