Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is good but try to make it more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'and plus', use 'and' or 'also'. Also, try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences for clarity.

예시: I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected and share my feelings when we can't talk on the phone. Additionally, chatting improves my English skills.

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' and organize your answer with clear linking words. Also, be more specific about the topics you discuss and avoid repeating phrases like 'about anything new'.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about our daily routines and updates on our academic progress. Sometimes, we also talk about relationship matters depending on the situation.

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference logically and provide specific reasons.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because it helps keep our conversations private. Group chats can sometimes lead to misunderstandings or affect many people.

제안: Avoid repetition and filler words. Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and complete sentences. Be specific about why you prefer social media communication.

예시: Nowadays, I prefer communicating via social media because it saves travel costs and allows me to stay connected easily with my friends.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific about how arguing helps your friendship.

예시: I sometimes argue with my friends when our ideas differ. However, friendly debates help us understand each other better and strengthen our relationships.

× I love to chat with my friends because it helps to stay connected with them and plus it helps me to share my feelings whenever they don't have time for call or video call and it helps me also to enhance my English.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected with them, and it also helps me share my feelings whenever they don't have time for a call or video call, and it also helps me enhance my English.

The verb 'love' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'helps me to share' is better as 'helps me share' for natural English. 'Time for call' should be 'time for a call' because 'call' is a countable noun here. The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity.

× I love to chat with my friends because it helps to stay connected with them and plus it helps me to share my feelings whenever they don't have time for call or video call and it helps me also to enhance my English.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected with them, and it also helps me share my feelings whenever they don't have time for a call or video call, and it also helps me enhance my English.

The phrase 'time for call' is incorrect; it should be 'time for a call' because 'call' is a countable noun and requires an article. Proper preposition and article usage improves clarity.

× Uh, I usually chat with, uh, with my friends about, I think on our daily routine as well as, uh, anything new about our academic career.

✓ Uh, I usually chat with my friends about, I think, our daily routine as well as anything new about our academic career.

The phrase 'chat with, uh, with my friends about, I think on our daily routine' is awkward. 'Chat about' is correct; 'on' is unnecessary here. Removing extra prepositions and fillers improves sentence flow.

× Uh, I usually chat with, uh, with my friends about, I think on our daily routine as well as, uh, anything new about our academic career.

✓ Uh, I usually chat with my friends about, I think, our daily routine as well as anything new about our academic career.

The preposition 'on' after 'think' is incorrect in this context. We say 'think about' or just omit it here. Correct preposition use is important for clarity.

× Plus we also chat about anything new, about any relationship stuff, Plus it umm, depend upon.

✓ Plus, we also chat about anything new, including relationship stuff. Plus, it depends on that.

The sentence is incomplete and uses 'depend upon' without an object. 'Depends on' is the correct phrase, and the sentence needs completion for clarity. Also, 'Plus' should be followed by a comma when starting a sentence.

× I will, I will rather prefer to talk with individuals rather than chatting in Group because, uh, well, chatting individually, it helps to keep secret among us.

✓ I would rather prefer to talk with individuals rather than chat in a group because chatting individually helps keep secrets among us.

'I will rather prefer' is awkward; 'I would rather prefer' or simply 'I prefer' is better. Also, 'chatting in Group' should be 'chat in a group' with the article. 'Helps to keep secret' should be 'helps keep secrets' for natural phrasing.

× I will, I will rather prefer to talk with individuals rather than chatting in Group because, uh, well, chatting individually, it helps to keep secret among us.

✓ I would rather prefer to talk with individuals rather than chat in a group because chatting individually helps keep secrets among us.

The noun 'Group' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' when used generally. Correct article usage is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× And if we talk in Group, it will it, it won't, it will affect a lot of people some well, I'm chatting so I.

✓ And if we talk in a group, it will affect a lot of people. Well, I'm chatting, so I...

The sentence is fragmented and confusing with repeated pronouns and unclear references. Simplifying and correcting pronoun use improves clarity.

× And if we talk in Group, it will it, it won't, it will affect a lot of people some well, I'm chatting so I.

✓ And if we talk in a group, it will affect a lot of people. Well, I'm chatting, so I...

'Group' needs the article 'a' as it is a singular countable noun. Proper article use is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× Uh, nowadays, nowadays I'm, I really prefer to communicate, uh, by social media because it helps to save a lot of cost while traveling to meet with them and, and also it helps to keep me, uh, more, uh, absolutely social media.

✓ Nowadays, I really prefer to communicate via social media because it helps save a lot of travel costs, and it also helps me stay more connected through social media.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect with 'social media'; 'via' or 'through' is correct. Also, 'save a lot of cost while traveling' is better as 'save a lot of travel costs'. The sentence is also awkward and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Uh, nowadays, nowadays I'm, I really prefer to communicate, uh, by social media because it helps to save a lot of cost while traveling to meet with them and, and also it helps to keep me, uh, more, uh, absolutely social media.

✓ Nowadays, I really prefer to communicate via social media because it helps save a lot of travel costs, and it also helps me stay more connected through social media.

'By social media' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'via' or 'through' when referring to communication methods. Proper preposition use is important for natural English.

× That makes sense a bit of friendly debate can actually help strengthen friendships and deepen understand.

✓ That makes sense. A bit of friendly debate can actually help strengthen friendships and deepen understanding.

The verb 'deepen' should be followed by a noun, so 'understand' (a verb) is incorrect here. The correct noun form is 'understanding'. Also, the sentence needs a period to separate ideas.

× I argue with my friend of one because whenever our idea and belief contrast with each other, we tends to argue a lot and plus it helps to keep healthy relations among us and abroad our.

✓ I argue with one of my friends because whenever our ideas and beliefs contrast with each other, we tend to argue a lot, and it helps keep healthy relations among us and beyond.

'Friend of one' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my friends'. 'Idea and belief' should be plural 'ideas and beliefs' to match 'we'. 'We tends' is incorrect; 'we' requires 'tend'. 'Abroad our' is incorrect; 'beyond' or 'outside' is better. Correct singular/plural forms and verb agreement are essential.