Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I chatting”应为“I chat”或“I am chatting”，且表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复和口语填充词。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share daily experiences, like what I had for lunch or any problems I faced.

제안: 回答结构较好，但存在语法错误，如“It’s help”应为“It helps”，建议注意主谓一致，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about both happy and challenging moments. For instance, we share interesting daily experiences, which helps us stay close and support each other.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，如“my best friend only two”不明确，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并注意单复数和冠词的使用。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because I feel more comfortable sharing secrets and having deeper conversations.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“to to”，且表达不够自然，建议改进句子结构，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: Actually, I prefer face-to-face communication, especially on special occasions, because it’s easier to understand the other person's tone and emotions.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，如“my friends and me have all have a good temper”不正确，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，注意主格和宾格的使用，并使用更自然的表达。

예시: Honestly, I rarely argue with my friends because we all have good temperaments and communicate openly to resolve any mistakes quickly.

× I chatting with my friends to share some daily life, like what I eat at lunch and uh, something bad.

✓ I chat with my friends to share some daily life, like what I eat at lunch and uh, something bad.

这里动词chat后面不应该直接用-ing形式，应该用一般现在时的动词形式chat，因为主语是第一人称单数，表示习惯性动作。

× I will share with her everything.

✓ I will share everything with them.

前文提到的是friends，复数，代词应使用them而不是her。

× I always tell my friends everyday because I like to share both happy and bad moments with them.

✓ I always tell my friends every day because I like to share both happy and bad moments with them.

everyday是形容词，表示“日常的”，这里应使用副词短语every day，表示“每天”。

× It's help us stay close and support each other.

✓ It helps us stay close and support each other.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词help应加-s变为helps。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think I have many friends, but my best friend only two and I always chat with them one friends because it can share some secret.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think I have many friends, but my best friends are only two and I always chat with these two friends because we can share some secrets.

best friend应为复数best friends，且句子结构混乱，需调整以表达“我只有两个最好的朋友”，并且them one friends不合适，应改为these two friends。

× Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face-to-face.

face-to-face作为副词短语，需用连字符连接。

× I think it is important for me to to communicate on some special vacation and it can easy to know their tone.

✓ I think it is important for me to communicate on some special occasions and it is easy to know their tone.

vacation用法不当，应为occasions（场合）；句中多了一个to；it can easy应为it is easy。

× Honestly, I don't remember we argue with others.

✓ Honestly, I don't remember us arguing with others.

remember后接动词时应用动名词形式arguing，且we argue结构不正确，应改为us arguing。

× I think my friends and me have all have a good temper to come to communicate each other and if we have some mistake we will take out it immediately.

✓ I think my friends and I all have a good temper to communicate with each other, and if we make some mistakes, we will sort them out immediately.

主格代词应为I而非me；have all have重复，应删去一个；communicate each other缺少介词with；some mistake应为复数some mistakes；take out it表达不当，应为sort them out。