Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use more concise language. Also, ensure the tense is consistent; 'enjoyed' should be 'enjoy' to match the present tense question. You could also add a linking phrase to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, but I prefer calling because I like hearing their voices and the natural emotions when I tell a story.

제안: Your answer is good but could be improved by correcting word order and using linking words for coherence. For example, instead of 'how was my day', say 'how my day was'. Also, use linking words like 'such as' or 'for instance' to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: We usually chat about our achievements and daily routines. For instance, I tell them how my day was, whether it was challenging or enjoyable, what I ate, and what the weather was like in my town.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, 'stay in connect' should be 'stay connected'. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas.

예시: I think it depends on my mood. Sometimes, when I feel introverted, I prefer to stay connected with only one person; however, when I feel more extroverted and open-minded, I like talking to a big group of people.

제안: Improve sentence fluency and grammar. For example, say 'ask about a task at university' and 'I prefer face-to-face conversation'. Also, use linking words like 'however' to contrast preferences.

예시: Actually, I think it depends. For instance, when I want to ask about a task at university, it's more comfortable to send a message. However, when I want to talk about my day or the weather, I prefer face-to-face conversation.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and use more formal expressions. Also, try to expand your answer slightly with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we all have emotions. For instance, a month ago I had a big fight with a close friend, but now we have resolved our differences and are fine.

× I can tell them how was my day, was it challenging or enjoyable for me, what I ate or what the weather was in my town that day.

✓ I can tell them how my day was, whether it was challenging or enjoyable for me, what I ate, or what the weather was like in my town that day.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the question word order 'how was my day' in a statement. In reported speech or statements, the subject should come before the verb ('how my day was'). Also, 'what the weather was' should be 'what the weather was like' to be grammatically correct and natural in English.

× Well I think it depends on my mood because sometimes I feel really introverted and uh I want to stay in connect only with one person but when I feel more extroverted and open minded I want to talk to a big group of people.

✓ Well, I think it depends on my mood because sometimes I feel really introverted and uh I want to stay in contact only with one person, but when I feel more extroverted and open-minded, I want to talk to a big group of people.

The phrase 'stay in connect' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'stay in contact'. Also, 'open minded' should be hyphenated as 'open-minded' when used as an adjective before a noun or in this context.

× Actually I think it depends. For instance, when I want to ask about the task from a university, it's more comfortable for me to send a message to a person. But when I want to talk about my day or for example about weather, I would like to face to face conversation.

✓ Actually, I think it depends. For instance, when I want to ask about a task from the university, it's more comfortable for me to send a message to a person. But when I want to talk about my day or, for example, about the weather, I would like to have a face-to-face conversation.

The phrase 'face to face conversation' needs hyphens to form the compound adjective 'face-to-face'. Also, 'about weather' should be 'about the weather' because 'weather' is a specific noun here. Additionally, 'ask about the task from a university' is better as 'ask about a task from the university' to sound more natural.