Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'prefer change' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể với các liên từ phù hợp.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us catch up and share interesting stories. I usually prefer chatting at home where we can relax and talk about our daily lives comfortably.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh dùng các câu hỏi trong câu trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually talk about my daily experiences, like what I did or how I felt during the day. Sometimes, I also invite my friends to hang out after work, such as going for a drink together.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'prefer chat' nên là 'prefer to chat'. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

예시: It depends on the situation. If I want to discuss private matters, I prefer to chat with one friend. However, if I want to organize a party, I usually create a group chat to include everyone.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm uh' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'community face to face' thành 'communicate face-to-face'. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I think it depends on the situation. If something is urgent, I definitely prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more secure and comfortable. However, for sharing daily experiences, I usually use social media.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và sửa một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. For example, last year when my best friend and I went to Thailand, he wanted to wake up early for breakfast since he is a morning person. However, I preferred to sleep longer because I thought it was unnecessary to wake up so early.

× I really prefer change with my friends at home where we can share our daily lives and talk everything and which helps us relaxed.

✓ I really prefer chatting with my friends at home where we can share our daily lives and talk about everything, which helps us relax.

The verb 'change' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'chatting' to match the context. Also, 'talk everything' should be 'talk about everything' to use the correct preposition. 'Helps us relaxed' should be 'helps us relax' because 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb.

× I really tried my daily experience with my friends, such as what did I do, what did I drink today, how was my feeling?

✓ I really try to share my daily experiences with my friends, such as what I did, what I drank today, and how I felt.

The verb 'tried' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'try' is appropriate. Also, questions like 'what did I do' should be statements 'what I did' in this context. 'Feeling' should be 'felt' to match past tense.

× If I want to talk about private things, of course I prefer chat with one friend, but if I want to hold a party, I will create a group and take everybody here.

✓ If I want to talk about private things, of course I prefer to chat with one friend, but if I want to hold a party, I will create a group and invite everybody here.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb: 'prefer to chat'. 'Take everybody here' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'invite everybody here'.

× If something urgent, I definitely prefer community face to face which makes me feel more security and comfortable.

✓ If something is urgent, I definitely prefer communicating face to face, which makes me feel more secure and comfortable.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'something'. 'Prefer community' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer communicating'. 'Security' is a noun; the adjective 'secure' is needed here.

× But for me, I prefer to sleep longer. I think it's not necessary.

✓ But for me, I prefer to sleep longer. I think it is not necessary.

Contraction 'it's' is acceptable but in formal speech 'it is' is clearer. No major pronoun error here, but the sentence is fine as corrected.