Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, say "Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected. We often talk about various topics randomly."

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected. We often talk about various topics randomly, such as our hobbies or recent experiences.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, be more specific with examples. For instance, say "I usually chat about our daily lives, including schoolwork and hobbies. For example, we share updates about movies we've watched and places we prefer not to visit, which helps us stay connected."

예시: I usually chat about our daily lives, including schoolwork and hobbies. For example, we share updates about movies we've watched and places we prefer not to visit, which helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

제안: Focus on clarity and grammar. Avoid filler words like "uh" and correct plural forms. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, "I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations. This way, I can focus better on their feelings and thoughts, which helps build a stronger connection."

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations. This way, I can focus better on their feelings and thoughts, which helps build a stronger connection.

제안: Good answer but improve grammar and use linking words for coherence. For example, "I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction. In-person conversations enable me to read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstandings."

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction. In-person conversations enable me to read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstandings.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these arguments usually help us understand each other better."

예시: Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these arguments usually help us understand each other better.

× Actually yes I like chatting with friends and me and my old friends are chatting with some of topic and especially I and all my friends topic to randomly.

✓ Actually, yes, I like chatting with friends. My old friends and I chat about various topics randomly.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear structure and awkward phrasing. Breaking it into two sentences and correcting pronoun order ('My old friends and I') improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually chat with my friends about our daily life, such as high school works or hobbies.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as high school work or hobbies.

'Daily life' should be pluralized to 'daily lives' to reflect multiple individuals. 'High school works' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here and should not be pluralized.

× For example, we often share updates about movies we have watched, our places we don't like visit.

✓ For example, we often share updates about movies we have watched and places we don't like to visit.

The phrase 'places we don't like visit' is missing the preposition 'to' before 'visit'. Also, connecting the two ideas with 'and' improves sentence flow.

× This conversation help us stay connected and understand each others.

✓ These conversations help us stay connected and understand each other.

'Conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match the plural verb 'help'. 'Each others' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'each other'.

× I prefer chatting with only one friends because it allows for deeper and uh, no meaningful conversation.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversation.

'Friends' should be singular 'friend' because 'one' indicates a single person. 'No meaningful' is incorrect; 'more meaningful' fits the intended meaning.

× When talking 111 it easier to focus on the other person feelings and thoughts which uh which helps pools a stronger connection.

✓ When talking one-on-one, it is easier to focus on the other person's feelings and thoughts, which helps build a stronger connection.

The phrase 'talking 111' is unclear and likely a typo for 'talking one-on-one'. The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'it'. 'Other person feelings' needs possessive form 'other person's'. 'Helps pools' is incorrect; 'helps build' is appropriate.

× I prefer to communicate it face to face because it allows more genuine and effective interaction.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows more genuine and effective interaction.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Communicate' is a transitive verb that does not require 'it' in this context.

× In person conversation enable me to read the body language and facial expression which helps avoid the misunderstanding.

✓ In-person conversation enables me to read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstandings.

'In person' should be hyphenated as 'In-person' when used as an adjective. 'Conversation' is singular and requires 'enables' (third person singular). 'Facial expression' should be plural 'expressions' to match 'body language'. 'The misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings' for general meaning.

× Yes, I occasionally argued with friends, especially when we have different options on important topics.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics.

'Argued' is past tense, but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'argue' is correct. 'Options' is incorrect; the intended word is 'opinions'.

× However, these arguments are usually friends help us understand each others better.

✓ However, these arguments usually help us understand each other better.

The phrase 'are usually friends help us' is ungrammatical and confusing. Removing 'friends' and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning. 'Each others' should be 'each other'.