Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially at night when we are all free. We usually talk about how we spent our day and plan what to do the next day. Sometimes, I also prefer calling them to have a more personal conversation.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to organize your ideas and be more specific in your descriptions.

예시: We usually chat about our daily activities. Additionally, if there is a football match, we discuss the strategies, teamwork, and players' records to analyze the game better.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because I am an introvert. Talking one-on-one gives me more comfort and satisfaction, which I have experienced since childhood.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more fluent. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: That's an interesting question. As I mentioned, I am an introvert, so I prefer communicating via social media platforms like WhatsApp, Instagram, and Snapchat. This is because I feel more comfortable and calm when talking online rather than face-to-face.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, we argue quite often because we have disagreements on certain topics. For instance, when we support different football teams, we argue and tease each other about our teams' performances.

× Another thing that you wanted to talking to my friends on call.

✓ Another thing is that I want to talk to my friends on call.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'wanted to talking' which mixes past tense with the -ing form. The correct form is 'want to talk' to express present desire. Use the base form of the verb after 'want to'.

× We talk about how we spent our day and if also if there is a match happening, we discuss about strategies and the teamwork and discuss about like record of football.

✓ We talk about how we spent our day and, if there is a match happening, we discuss strategies, teamwork, and the football record.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessarily repeated after 'discuss'. The verb 'discuss' is directly followed by the object without 'about'. Also, 'like record of football' is unclear and corrected to 'the football record'.

× I like to chat with one friend at one time. They also void chatting with friends in a group because I am an introvert and chatting.

✓ I like to chat with one friend at a time. I also avoid chatting with friends in a group because I am an introvert.

The phrase 'at one time' should be 'at a time' to indicate one instance. 'They also void' is incorrect; 'I also avoid' is correct to match the subject and verb. 'Void' is a noun, 'avoid' is the correct verb here.

× Chatting with one friend gives an inner satisfaction and this is my childhood.

✓ Chatting with one friend gives me inner satisfaction, and I have preferred this since my childhood.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. Adding 'me' clarifies who receives satisfaction. 'This is my childhood' is incorrect; 'I have preferred this since my childhood' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× So that's why I prefer talking on social media like WhatsApp, Instagram, Snapchat because it's my comfort zone and I feel very peaceful and calm while talking on social.

✓ So that's why I prefer talking on social media like WhatsApp, Instagram, and Snapchat because they are my comfort zone and I feel very peaceful and calm while talking on social media.

The pronoun 'it's' refers to singular, but multiple platforms are mentioned, so 'they are' is correct. Also, 'talking on social' is incomplete; it should be 'talking on social media'.

× A lot of time, I mean there, there are a number of times we argue in the fight with each other because we always have a discharge agreement about one thing.

✓ A lot of times, I mean there are a number of times we argue and fight with each other because we always have a disagreement about one thing.

'A lot of time' should be 'a lot of times' to indicate frequency. 'Discharge agreement' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'disagreement'. Also, 'argue in the fight' is awkward; 'argue and fight' is better.

× For example, if we support different teams, so we fight against each other, we we have disagreement, we support our team and mock each other.

✓ For example, if we support different teams, we fight against each other, we have disagreements, we support our team, and mock each other.

The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary after 'if' and should be removed. Also, 'we we' is a repetition error. 'Disagreement' should be plural 'disagreements' to match the context.