Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'Uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar errors, for example, say 'structured activities' instead of 'structured activity'.

예시: I don't particularly enjoy chatting because I am an introvert. Instead, I prefer doing structured activities with my friends, such as shopping or watching movies, as I find these more enjoyable than just chatting at a coffee shop.

제안: Improve vocabulary and sentence clarity. Use more precise words like 'clothing' instead of 'stuff' and correct grammar such as 'people in their 40s'. Also, use linking words to make the answer more coherent.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about fashion because we are interested in dressing appropriately as we get older. For instance, we often discuss what clothing suits people in their 40s and how our tastes change over time. I enjoy these conversations because they help me stay updated and feel confident about my appearance.

제안: Work on sentence structure and grammar to make your ideas clearer. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your points logically. For example, say 'I prefer one-on-one conversations because it is easier to express my feelings' and explain why.

예시: I prefer one-on-one conversations because it is much easier for me to express my feelings. In group chats, I tend to be more reserved and prefer listening rather than speaking.

제안: Correct vocabulary and grammar mistakes, such as 'copy' should be 'convey' and 'special expression' should be 'facial expressions'. Also, improve sentence clarity and coherence by using linking words properly.

예시: It depends on the situation, but I generally prefer communicating face-to-face because it is easier for me to convey my message clearly through voice, tone, and facial expressions. For example, when discussing important matters, seeing the other person's reaction helps me understand their feelings better, which social media cannot fully provide.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'Uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar, for example, 'as humans' instead of 'we as a human'.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends due to miscommunication. As humans, we can make mistakes when conveying messages, especially when there is noise or other problems during the communication process.

× I am an introvert person.

✓ I am an introverted person.

The adjective 'introvert' is a noun; the correct adjective form to describe a person is 'introverted'. Using 'introverted' properly modifies 'person'.

× I prefer to do something structured activity with my friends, such as shopping or watching movies.

✓ I prefer to do some structured activities with my friends, such as shopping or watching movies.

The phrase 'something structured activity' is incorrect because 'activity' is singular but preceded by 'something' which is singular and uncountable. Using 'some structured activities' correctly matches plural countable noun with quantifier.

× I think that is more ideal for me to go out with my friends rather than chatting at a coffee shop.

✓ I think it is more ideal for me to go out with my friends rather than chat at a coffee shop.

The pronoun 'that' is less appropriate here; 'it' is the correct dummy subject. Also, 'chatting' should be parallel with 'go out', so 'chat' is better as a verb in base form after 'rather than'.

× I usually chat with my friend about fashion because we are interested in how we dress appropriately as we get older.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about fashion because we are interested in how we dress appropriately as we get older.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the plural pronoun 'we' and the context of chatting with multiple people.

× For example, we often discuss what stuff suits the people in 40s and how we taste how to change over time.

✓ For example, we often discuss what styles suit people in their 40s and how our tastes change over time.

'Stuff' is informal and vague; 'styles' is more appropriate. 'The people in 40s' should be 'people in their 40s'. 'How we taste how to change' is incorrect; it should be 'how our tastes change'.

× I enjoy this conversation because they help me to stay updated and feel confident in my appearance.

✓ I enjoy this conversation because it helps me to stay updated and feel confident in my appearance.

'They' is incorrect as it refers to plural; 'conversation' is singular, so 'it' and 'helps' are correct.

× I like to do it one-on-one a personal conversation because for me it is much easier for me to express my feelings rather than group chatting.

✓ I like to have one-on-one personal conversations because for me it is much easier to express my feelings than in group chats.

'Do it one-on-one a personal conversation' is awkward; 'have one-on-one personal conversations' is correct. Also, 'rather than group chatting' should be 'than in group chats' for clarity and correctness.

× When you are in a group chatting you, you will be more reserved about your idea you.

✓ When you are in a group chat, you will be more reserved about your ideas.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced pronouns 'you' and incorrect plural 'idea' should be 'ideas'. Also, 'group chatting' should be 'group chat'.

× I prefer to listen rather than talking.

✓ I prefer to listen rather than talk.

After 'prefer to', the verb should be in base form; 'talking' is incorrect here.

× It depends on the situation, but I generally prefer communicating face to face because it is easier for me to copy my message clearly through voice, tone and special expression.

✓ It depends on the situation, but I generally prefer communicating face to face because it is easier for me to convey my message clearly through voice, tone, and facial expressions.

'Copy my message' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'convey'. Also, 'special expression' should be 'facial expressions'.

× For example, when discussing important matters, seeing the ones the other person's reaction helps me understand their feelings better, which is something social media can live fully provided.

✓ For example, when discussing important matters, seeing the other person's reaction helps me understand their feelings better, which is something social media cannot fully provide.

The phrase 'seeing the ones the other person's reaction' is incorrect; it should be 'seeing the other person's reaction'. Also, 'can live fully provided' is incorrect; it should be 'cannot fully provide'.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes when it comes to miscommunication.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes when it comes to miscommunication.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× Uh, sometimes we as a human, we will make a mistake in terms of conveying the message because sometimes we get noise and problems during the communication process.

✓ Uh, sometimes we as humans make mistakes in conveying messages because sometimes there is noise and problems during the communication process.

'We as a human' should be 'we as humans' to match plural. 'Make a mistake' should be plural 'make mistakes' to agree with 'we'. 'We get noise' is incorrect; 'there is noise' is correct.