Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ภาษาอังกฤษที่เป็นธรรมชาติและถูกต้องมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้คำว่า 'like chatting with friends' แทน 'like chatting with friend' และควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'lilac' ที่ไม่เหมาะสมในบริบทนี้ นอกจากนี้ควรตอบให้ครบถ้วนและชัดเจนโดยไม่ซ้ำซ้อน

예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it is enjoyable and helps me relax during my free time. I believe chatting has many benefits, such as exchanging stories and sharing experiences.

제안: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'I usually chat with my friends every day' และควรอธิบายรายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมอย่างชัดเจนโดยใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของบทสนทนา

예시: I usually chat with my friends every day. It allows me to share many stories and feel connected with them. My friends also support me in many aspects of my life.

제안: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am shy' และควรอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนโดยใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความสมเหตุสมผล

예시: I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am shy. When I talk with a group, I feel uncomfortable. Chatting one-on-one allows me to share many things confidentially.

제안: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และชัดเจน เช่น 'I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is clearer' และควรอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างละเอียดและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is easier to understand the topic clearly. When we use social media, sometimes messages can be misunderstood.

제안: ควรตอบคำถามอย่างตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'No, I don't argue with my friends because I am a shy person' และควรอธิบายเพิ่มเติมด้วยเหตุผลที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อม

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends because I am a shy person. I usually agree with them to keep the peace, which I think is a good way to maintain our friendship.

× Yes, I like chatting with friend because it's lilac for me and make me fun in free time I think I believe that chatting with friend have many benefit.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because it's like fun for me and makes me happy in free time. I think I believe that chatting with friends has many benefits.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to more than one person. 'Lilac' is incorrect and should be 'like fun'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'chatting'. 'Benefit' should be plural 'benefits' because it refers to multiple advantages.

× Yes, I usually chat with friend every day.

✓ Yes, I usually chat with friends every day.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the speaker chats with more than one friend.

× Is allow me to to share many story and feel connect with author.

✓ It allows me to share many stories and feel connected with others.

The sentence lacks a subject 'It' and the modal verb 'allows' is needed to express ability. 'Story' should be plural 'stories'. 'Feel connect' should be 'feel connected'. 'Author' is incorrect and should be 'others' or 'people'.

× My friend support me in in many things.

✓ My friends support me in many things.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the plural verb 'support'. The repeated 'in' is a typo and should be corrected.

× I prefer chat with only one friend because I am shy.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am shy.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'chat' to form the correct infinitive structure.

× If I talk with a group people I think U.S. chat only one with friend can share many things and confidential.

✓ If I talk with a group of people, I think chatting with only one friend can share many things confidentially.

'Group people' should be 'group of people'. 'U.S.' is incorrect and removed. 'Chat only one with friend' is corrected to 'chatting with only one friend'. 'Confidential' is an adjective; the adverb 'confidentially' is appropriate here.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because. It clear topic to talk with author if we communicate with social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is clearer to talk about topics with others than if we communicate via social media.

The sentence had a period after 'because' which is incorrect. 'It clear topic to talk with author' is corrected to 'it is clearer to talk about topics with others'. 'Communicate with social media' is corrected to 'communicate via social media'.

× No I am not. I don't agree with faith because I I am shy person.

✓ No, I do not. I don't argue with friends because I am a shy person.

'I am not' is incomplete; 'I do not' is clearer. 'I don't agree with faith' is incorrect in context; it should be 'I don't argue with friends'. The repeated 'I' is a typo. 'Shy person' needs an article 'a'.

× I usually follow my friend. I think it is a good way to to con.

✓ I usually follow my friends. I think it is a good way to avoid conflict.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. The phrase 'to to con' is unclear and likely a typo; corrected to 'to avoid conflict' to make sense in context.