Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了个人感受，但语法错误较多，如“must to say”应为“must say”，且回答中有些重复和口语填充词较多。建议简化表达，避免语法错误，并使句子更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends. Although I am introverted and feel uneasy around strangers, I feel comfortable and can talk freely when I am with close friends.

제안: 回答内容有些混乱，句子结构不够清晰，且有语法错误，如“almost everyone use”应为“almost everyone uses”。建议明确主题句，使用连贯的句子，并注意主谓一致。

예시: We usually chat about cosplay, which is very popular nowadays. Many people enjoy watching cartoons and animations, and cosplay, originating from Japan, is a common topic among us.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I like share”应为“I like to share”，且表达不够连贯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免口语填充词，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: It depends on the situation. I have a strong desire to share new things with my friends, but sometimes I prefer to share certain things only with my close friends.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但“fancy”用词稍显口语化，且“this problem can directly be solved”表达不够自然。建议使用更正式的词汇和更自然的表达。

예시: Honestly, I prefer communicating via social media because I am quite introverted. Looking directly into people's eyes makes me feel uneasy and nervous, but social media helps me avoid this discomfort.

제안: 回答中“the encounter between people is dusted”表达不清晰，可能是用词错误。建议使用更准确的表达，避免模糊或错误的词汇，并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I do argue with my friends occasionally because of our different personalities. However, I believe disagreements are normal, and it's important to cherish and maintain our relationships.

× I must to say I'm an introverted girl.

✓ I must say I'm an introverted girl.

情态动词must后面不加to，正确用法是must + 动词原形。

× when I must meet some strangers I feel very uneasy

✓ when I have to meet some strangers I feel very uneasy

must用于表达义务时，口语中常用have to替代，且must后面不加to。此处表达“必须见陌生人”，用have to更自然。

× staying by the side of my friend

✓ staying by the side of my friends

friend应使用复数形式friends，因为通常是和多个朋友在一起。

× Nowadays almost everyone use social medias

✓ Nowadays almost everyone uses social media

everyone是单数，动词用第三人称单数形式uses；social media是不可数名词，不用复数形式medias。

× almost everyone use social medias

✓ almost everyone uses social media

主语everyone为单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式uses。

× Cosplay is a mainstream from Japan

✓ Cosplay is a mainstream in Japan

表示“主流”时，通常用in表示某地的主流，而不是from。

× I must say that my desire to share is very strong.

✓ I must say that my desire to share is very strong.

此句无错误，must用法正确。

× I like share some new things to my friends

✓ I like to share some new things with my friends

like后面应接动词不定式to share或动名词sharing；动词share后接介词with表示“与...分享”，而不是to。

× sometimes something only can share to your close friends

✓ sometimes some things can only be shared with your close friends

share后面用介词with表示“与...分享”；句子结构调整为被动语态更自然。

× I fancy communicating via social media

✓ I fancy communicating through social media

通过某种媒介通常用介词through，via虽可用但较正式，through更口语化。

× It makes me feel uneasy and nervous.

✓ It makes me feel uneasy and nervous.

此句无错误，代词用法正确。

× this problem can directly be solved

✓ this problem can be solved directly

副词directly应放在be动词之后，动词之前，语序调整更自然。

× the encounter between people is dusted

✓ the encounter between people is fleeting

dusted用法错误，意为“布满灰尘”，此处应使用形容词fleeting表示“短暂的”。

× We need to cherish the relationship between us.

✓ We need to cherish the relationship between us.

此句无错误，连词用法正确。