Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and effective, but you can improve by adding a linking word to connect your ideas more smoothly, such as 'Moreover' or 'Additionally'.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. Moreover, after a long day, talking about our experiences or funny stories always lifts my mood. It also strengthens our relationships by keeping us connected.

제안: Try to correct grammar mistakes and use linking words like 'for example' to make your answer clearer and more coherent.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as school, work, or hobbies. For example, we often share funny stories or discuss recent movies and music we enjoy. Talking about common interests helps us stay connected and strengthen our friendship.

제안: Be careful with word choice and pronunciation; use 'chatting' instead of 'shutting'. Also, use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversation. When it's just one-on-one, I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts and listening carefully. For example, I often have better discussions about personal topics with a closer friend rather than in a group setting.

제안: Focus on grammar and clarity. For example, say 'In-person conversations enable me...' and avoid unclear phrases like 'All the social media is confident.' Use linking words like 'because' and 'which' properly.

예시: I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction. In-person conversations enable me to read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstandings. I find that face-to-face communication builds stronger personal connections.

제안: Correct subject-verb agreement and use plural forms properly. Also, use linking words like 'however' effectively to contrast ideas.

예시: Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better. For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often leads to understanding discussions rather than conflicts.

× We often share funny stories or discusses recent movies and music we enjoy.

✓ We often share funny stories or discuss recent movies and music we enjoy.

The verb 'discusses' is incorrectly used here because after 'or' joining two verbs, both should be in the base form. Since 'share' is in base form, 'discusses' should be 'discuss' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.

× Talking about common interests helps us stay connected and strength our friendship.

✓ Talking about common interests helps us stay connected and strengthen our friendship.

The word 'strength' is a noun, but here a verb is needed to match 'helps us stay connected and ... our friendship.' The correct verb form is 'strengthen' to indicate the action of making the friendship stronger.

× I prefer shutting with only one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversation.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversation.

The verb 'shutting' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'chatting' which means talking informally. 'Shutting' means closing something and does not fit the meaning here.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb to describe the manner of communication.

× In person conversation enable me to read body language and facial expression, which helps avoid misunderstanding.

✓ In-person conversation enables me to read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstanding.

'Conversation' is singular, so the verb should be 'enables' (third person singular). Also, 'facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions' to match the plural 'body language' and general meaning.

× All the social media is confident.

✓ All social media is convenient.

The original sentence 'All the social media is confident' is incorrect because 'social media' is uncountable and 'confident' is an adjective describing a person, not a thing. Likely, the intended word is 'convenient' to express ease of use.

× I find that face to face communication builds stronger personal connection.

✓ I find that face-to-face communication builds stronger personal connections.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. Also, 'connection' should be plural 'connections' to match the general meaning of multiple personal connections.

× However, this argument are usually friendly and help us understand each other better.

✓ However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better.

'Argument' is singular, but the verb 'are' is plural. To match the plural verb 'are', the noun should be plural 'arguments'. This ensures subject-verb agreement.