Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'or' repeated unnecessarily. Also, make your answer more concise and structured by directly stating your opinion and giving clear reasons with examples. This will make your response sound more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share ideas and opinions. Usually, we chat when we go out together or have coffee, which makes our conversations more enjoyable.

제안: Avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and repeated words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be more specific by giving examples of topics or solutions you discuss. This will improve coherence and content richness.

예시: We usually discuss how to balance work and personal life since our schedules are hectic. For example, we share tips on managing time effectively. Additionally, we update each other about events happening in our friend circle.

제안: Reduce filler words and repetitions. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect ideas logically. This will make your answer clearer and more natural.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it helps maintain privacy. Also, it is easier to give and receive advice in a one-on-one conversation rather than in a group.

제안: Avoid excessive hesitation and incomplete sentences. Make your answer concise and coherent by using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your preference.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps build stronger bonds. Although our schedules are hectic and we meet only once a month, we make the most of our time together to discuss important matters.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and filler words. Structure your answer clearly by stating your opinion and explaining why. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. This will make your response more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I do argue with my friends when I think they are making wrong choices because I want to help them improve. I believe that healthy arguments can actually strengthen friendships.

× It helps to share your ideas and opinions and I usually chat with them when we go, uh, uh, go for outing or or else if we are having any coffee etcetera.

✓ It helps to share your ideas and opinions and I usually chat with them when we go, uh, uh, go for an outing or else if we are having any coffee etcetera.

The phrase 'go for outing' is incorrect because 'outing' is a countable noun and requires an article. The correct form is 'go for an outing'. This is a common preposition and article usage error.

× We try to give some solutions which can be helpful for the other person to manage their problems with.

✓ We try to give some solutions which can be helpful to the other person to manage their problems.

The preposition 'with' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. The phrase 'helpful to someone' is the correct usage. Ending the sentence with 'with' is grammatically incorrect.

× And we also talk about so many things going around our uh, friend circles and update each other about how how's the life going on to be.

✓ And we also talk about so many things going around our, uh, friend circles and update each other about how life is going on.

The phrase 'how how's the life going on to be' is incorrect. 'How's' is a contraction of 'how is' and should not be combined with 'how' again. Also, 'life' does not need 'the' here. The correct form is 'how life is going on'.

× In my opinion, I only prefer talking with only one friend because you know, the we can maintain the privacy of our personal life and we also know, and, and we can also suggest the solutions properly if we are with only one person rather than having a crowd of many people.

✓ In my opinion, I only prefer talking with only one friend because, you know, we can maintain the privacy of our personal life and we also can suggest solutions properly if we are with only one person rather than having a crowd of many people.

The phrase 'the we can maintain' contains an unnecessary article 'the'. Also, 'the solutions' is better as 'solutions' here because it refers to solutions in general, not specific ones. Removing 'the' improves the sentence's grammatical correctness.

× Usually, I prefer to have a communication via face to face, uh, contact.

✓ Usually, I prefer to have communication via face-to-face contact.

The phrase 'a communication' is incorrect because 'communication' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective before a noun: 'face-to-face contact'.

× It's uh, due to a very hectic schedule, we usually get, uh, we, we usually don't get much time to meet, uh, every monthly.

✓ It's, uh, due to a very hectic schedule, we usually don't get much time to meet every month.

The phrase 'every monthly' is incorrect. 'Monthly' is an adjective or adverb, but here the noun 'month' is needed with 'every'. So, 'every month' is correct.

× So whenever we meet, we have a good amount of communication which help us to, uh, create a bond very well and to solve our problems very.

✓ So whenever we meet, we have a good amount of communication which helps us to, uh, create a strong bond and to solve our problems effectively.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'amount'. Also, 'very' at the end is incomplete; it needs an adverb like 'effectively'. 'Create a bond very well' is awkward; 'create a strong bond' is better.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends whenever they go wrong, uh, go in wrong direction.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends whenever they go wrong, uh, go in the wrong direction.

The phrase 'go in wrong direction' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'go wrong' is correct but 'go in the wrong direction' is the proper phrase. The tense is correct here.

× I usually like them to guide, uh, for the betterment and to choose a better options.

✓ I usually like them to guide, uh, for the betterment and to choose better options.

The phrase 'a better options' is incorrect because 'options' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The correct form is 'better options' without 'a'.

× And the friends are the only one with whom you can argue and, uh, argue and make a friendship more stronger.

✓ And friends are the only ones with whom you can argue and, uh, argue and make a friendship stronger.

'The friends are the only one' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural and 'one' is singular. It should be 'friends are the only ones'. Also, 'more stronger' is incorrect; 'stronger' alone suffices.