Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ lặp lại và các tiếng ừ, ờ không cần thiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me express my feelings and feel more connected. We often talk about our hobbies and share experiences, which makes our friendship stronger.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'can't share them about'. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about my daily routine and experiences. We also share what we have learned and discuss our common hobbies, which helps me relax and feel comfortable.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'when I talking' nên là 'when I talk'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'comfortable' nhiều lần.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because group conversations are more lively and enjoyable. When I talk with several people, I feel more engaged and the atmosphere is fun. For instance, we often share jokes and stories, which makes me happy and relaxed.

제안: Bạn nên tránh bắt đầu câu bằng 'Because' một cách riêng biệt và nên nối các ý lại bằng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chính xác.

예시: I prefer face-to-face conversations rather than communicating via social media because in person, people can express their emotions more genuinely. Also, I feel more connected through body language when talking face-to-face.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'many each people' không đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời logic và cụ thể hơn.

예시: Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes because disagreements are unavoidable. Since everyone has their own opinions, it can be difficult to fully understand each other and maintain a strong connection.

× when I can talking something with them

✓ when I can talk about something with them

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'talking' is incorrect after 'can'; it should be 'talk'. Also, 'talk about something' is the correct phrase.

× having a lot of friends, uh, studying

✓ having a lot of friends who are studying

The phrase 'having a lot of friends, uh, studying' is incomplete and unclear. It should specify that the friends are studying, so 'who are studying' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I was chatting with my friends about my daily routine or my daily experiences

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my daily routine or my daily experiences

The question asks about usual habits, so the present simple tense 'usually chat' is appropriate instead of past continuous 'was chatting' which indicates a specific past action.

× I can't share them about my learnings and our hobbies together

✓ I can share with them about my learnings and our hobbies together

The verb 'share' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate the person with whom something is shared. 'Share them about' is incorrect.

× When I talking with several people

✓ When I talk with several people

After 'when', the verb should be in the base form or present simple tense, not the '-ing' form. 'Talking' is incorrect here; it should be 'talk'.

× we often share jokes and story

✓ we often share jokes and stories

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the plural 'jokes' and maintain parallel structure.

× I prefer face to face conversation rather than the communication on the Internet or social media

✓ I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than communication on the Internet or social media

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Also, 'the communication' is incorrect here; 'communication' without 'the' is appropriate.

× Because of the face to face conversation allows people to express their emotion more genuinely or when talking in person

✓ Because face-to-face conversation allows people to express their emotions more genuinely, when talking in person,

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Because of' followed by a clause with a verb. 'Because' should be used to introduce a clause with a verb. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match general meaning.

× many each people have their own perspective

✓ many people each have their own perspective

The phrase 'many each people' is incorrect. It should be 'many people each' to correctly express that many individuals each have their own perspective.

× when the group people in the group have different opinion

✓ when the people in the group have different opinions

'Group people' is incorrect; it should be 'people in the group'. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match 'different'.