Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고, 중복되는 표현과 불필요한 'uh'가 많습니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고, 명확한 주제문과 구체적인 이유를 포함하여 답변을 구성하세요.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we are the same age and share similar experiences, which makes it easy to understand each other.

제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 구체적인 주제를 명확하게 제시하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: We usually talk about recent purchases, how our lives have been lately, and sometimes about marriage and relationships.

제안: 답변이 불명확하고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I enjoy chatting both in groups and one-on-one because group chats are lively, but one-on-one conversations are more personal.

제안: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 문장 연결이 자연스럽지 않고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 부드럽게 연결하세요.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I am not very active on social media. Although I used to post on Instagram when I was younger, now I find in-person conversations more meaningful.

제안: 답변이 중복되고 불필요한 'uh'가 많으며, 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 자신의 의견을 표현하세요.

예시: I usually don't argue with my friends. If we have different opinions, we calmly share our views and learn from each other.

× Yes, I love to chat with my friends because they, uh, sometimes, uh, generally they have a similar experience with me and the as we are in the same age, so it is uh, easy to get sympathy.

✓ Yes, I love to chat with my friends because they sometimes generally have similar experiences with me and as we are the same age, it is easy to get sympathy.

The phrase 'a similar experience' should be plural 'similar experiences' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'in the same age' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'the same age'. These corrections improve noun number agreement and prepositional usage.

× Yes, I love to chat with my friends because they, uh, sometimes, uh, generally they have a similar experience with me and the as we are in the same age, so it is uh, easy to get sympathy.

✓ Yes, I love to chat with my friends because they sometimes generally have similar experiences with me and as we are the same age, it is easy to get sympathy.

The preposition 'in' before 'the same age' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted here, so the phrase should be 'as we are the same age'. This is a common prepositional error.

× I chat with friends about a bunch of things, what they bought recently or how are the lives are recent, recently and uh about the marriage and all the uh.

✓ I chat with friends about a bunch of things, like what they bought recently, how their lives have been recently, and about marriage and so on.

The original sentence has awkward structure and redundancy ('how are the lives are recent, recently'). Correcting the sentence to a clearer structure with proper clauses improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I enjoy both because, uh, there is a, there is a, a friend that I have chat with, uh, this five face and one and there are no category with her, but.

✓ I enjoy both because there is a friend that I chat with face to face, and there is no category with her, but...

The phrase 'I have chat with' is incorrect; it should be 'I chat with'. Also, 'this five face and one' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'face to face'. The plural 'there are no category' should be 'there is no category' to match singular 'category'.

× I enjoy both because, uh, there is a, there is a, a friend that I have chat with, uh, this five face and one and there are no category with her, but.

✓ I enjoy both because there is a friend that I chat with face to face, and there is no category with her, but...

The preposition 'with' after 'category' is incorrect; the phrase 'no category with her' is unclear but likely intended to mean 'no category between us' or 'no labels'. The sentence needs clarification, but preposition use is problematic here.

× I am not a very social media person. I don't like SNS or or posting on the Instagram. I did it very at my young age but I prefer face to face right now.

✓ I am not a very social media person. I don't like SNS or posting on Instagram. I did it a lot when I was young, but I prefer face to face now.

The phrase 'posting on the Instagram' should be 'posting on Instagram' without 'the'. 'I did it very at my young age' is incorrect; corrected to 'I did it a lot when I was young'. These corrections fix article use and tense consistency.

× I am not a very social media person. I don't like SNS or or posting on the Instagram. I did it very at my young age but I prefer face to face right now.

✓ I am not a very social media person. I don't like SNS or posting on Instagram. I did it a lot when I was young, but I prefer face to face now.

The definite article 'the' before 'Instagram' is unnecessary and incorrect. Proper nouns like 'Instagram' do not require 'the' unless part of the official name.

× Uh, I don't think so. I just be, I, I just, uh, meet and if they have a different point of view in the subject, we just exchange our, uh, our knowledge or what to do.

✓ Uh, I don't think so. I just meet them, and if they have a different point of view on a subject, we just exchange our knowledge or ideas about what to do.

The phrase 'I just be, I, I just, uh, meet' is incorrect; 'I just meet them' is correct. Also, 'in the subject' should be 'on a subject'. The sentence needed correction for verb form and preposition use.