Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر تفصيلاً وطبيعية. يمكنك شرح سبب حبك للدردشة رغم كونك انطوائيًا، مما يجعل إجابتك أكثر ثراءً ووضوحًا.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me feel connected, even though I'm naturally introverted.

제안: حاول استخدام كلمات ربط لجعل إجابتك أكثر ترابطًا، وكن أكثر تحديدًا في وصف المواضيع التي تناقشها مع أصدقائك.

예시: Since we have a strong relationship, our conversations flow naturally. We usually talk about our daily experiences and any interesting events that happened to us.

제안: حاول استخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح أفكارك بشكل أفضل، وقدم أمثلة محددة لتدعيم إجابتك.

예시: I usually prefer chatting with one friend because it's more personal; however, sometimes I enjoy group chats, especially when discussing exciting topics.

제안: حاول أن تكون أكثر إيجابية في التعبير وقدم أسبابًا واضحة تدعم تفضيلك، مع استخدام تراكيب لغوية أكثر طبيعية.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to think before I respond, which suits my introverted nature better than face-to-face conversations.

제안: حاول توضيح إجابتك أكثر وشرح سبب عدم جدالك مع الأصدقاء، مما يجعل إجابتك أكثر اكتمالاً وطبيعية.

예시: No, I usually avoid arguments with friends because I value our relationship and prefer to keep things peaceful.

× Yes I do, but actually I'm introvert.

✓ Yes I do, but actually I'm an introvert.

The word 'introvert' is a noun and requires an article 'an' before it when used to describe oneself. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Because of our strong relationship, we don't think about what we should speak in this chatting.

✓ Because of our strong relationship, we don't think about what we should say in this chat.

The verb 'speak' is generally used without an object or with a language, while 'say' is used to express what is said. Also, 'chatting' should be a noun 'chat' here. The preposition 'in' is incorrect; no preposition is needed before 'this chat'.

× We just chat about everything we saw on this day.

✓ We just chat about everything we saw that day.

The phrase 'on this day' is awkward in this context; 'that day' is more natural to refer to the day being discussed. Also, 'chat about' is correct.

× What's happening to each other is just a really normal conversation.

✓ What is happening to each other is just a really normal conversation.

The phrase 'What's happening to each other' is awkward and unclear. It should be 'What is happening with each other' or better rephrased. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, the correction is minimal. The sentence is somewhat unclear but grammatically corrected here.

× Sometimes I'd rather chat with group of friends.

✓ Sometimes I'd rather chat with a group of friends.

The noun phrase 'group of friends' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'group' to be grammatically correct.

× But actually it depends about how I feel and the topic that I wanna chat about.

✓ But actually it depends on how I feel and the topic that I want to chat about.

The verb 'depends' is followed by the preposition 'on', not 'about'. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech.

× Definitely by social media.

✓ Definitely via social media.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect here; 'via' or 'through' is the correct preposition to indicate the medium of communication.

× I'm so introverted and I don't trust myself and I have no confidence in face to face chatting.

✓ I'm so introverted that I don't trust myself and have no confidence in face-to-face chatting.

Using 'and' repeatedly creates a run-on sentence. Replacing the first 'and' with 'that' clarifies the cause-effect relationship. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'.