Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и логичным. Избегайте неуместных сравнений и старайтесь использовать связные предложения. Например, не стоит говорить "I feel like I'm cat" без объяснения. Лучше использовать простые и понятные выражения.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially after a busy day. It helps me relax and share my thoughts about various topics.

제안: Ответ должен быть более конкретным и логичным. Избегайте бессвязных фраз и старайтесь использовать правильную грамматику. Лучше привести конкретные темы для разговора и объяснить, почему они интересны.

예시: We usually talk about different topics, like our hobbies, recent movies, or interesting facts about animals. For example, we recently discussed why cats are often seen as lazy pets.

제안: Ответ должен быть более чётким и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности. Объясните причины своего предпочтения более ясно.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it feels more calm and personal. In a group, it can be overwhelming to keep up with all the messages.

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Объясните свои чувства и предпочтения более чётко, избегая непонятных фраз.

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friends' emotions, which makes me feel more confident. Sometimes, it's hard to understand emotions through social media.

제안: Ответ должен быть более грамматически правильным и связным. Объясните свои чувства и предпочтения более ясно, используя связующие слова.

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but not often. I prefer to keep a friendly atmosphere because I value our relationship.

× And I feel like I'm cat because cat is so like a gossip animal.

✓ And I feel like I'm a cat because cats are such gossipy animals.

The sentence lacks the indefinite article 'a' before 'cat' and uses 'cat' instead of the plural 'cats' when referring to the general characteristic of cats. Also, 'so like a gossip animal' is incorrect; it should be 'such gossipy animals' to describe cats properly.

× recently I chatted with my best friends about why cats is so lazy.

✓ recently I chatted with my best friends about why cats are so lazy.

The subject 'cats' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Animal in the world is so crazy, I know, but we're interested and we asked about chatty and chatty BBC because they eat.

✓ Animals in the world are so crazy, I know, but we're interested and we asked about chatty and chatty BBC because they eat.

The noun 'Animal' should be plural 'Animals' to refer to animals in general, and the verb should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject.

× I prefer child with only one friend because it feels like calmly then try to visit a group of people because when you're chatting with a group of people you feel so you have to answer only message in a group.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it feels calmer than trying to chat with a group of people, because when you're chatting with a group, you feel like you have to answer every message in the group.

The word 'child' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting'. Also, 'calmly' is an adverb but the adjective 'calmer' is needed here. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Definitely, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see their emotions and it's allowed me to be confident in their stability.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see their emotions and it allows me to be confident in their stability.

The phrase 'it's allowed me' is incorrect; it should be 'it allows me' to indicate present tense. Also, 'in their stability' is awkward; however, since the instruction limits corrections to listed grammar problems, only the verb form is corrected.

× Because when I chatting with friends in social media, I feel like why?

✓ Because when I am chatting with friends on social media, I feel like why?

The verb 'chatting' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' for social media, but only the tense issue is corrected as per instructions.

× I'm this kind of person who is don't like this kind of debates between friends because I love to be friendly atmosphere and yeah.

✓ I'm this kind of person who doesn't like this kind of debates between friends because I love a friendly atmosphere and yeah.

The phrase 'is don't like' is incorrect; it should be 'doesn't like' to agree with the singular subject 'who'. Also, 'be friendly atmosphere' needs an article 'a' before 'friendly atmosphere'.