Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但可以更自然流畅。建议减少重复表达，如“become closer”和“understand each other better”意义相近，可以合并。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it strengthens our bond and allows us to support each other through daily experiences and challenges.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但有语法错误，如“I'm a still a masters student”应为“I'm still a master's student”。建议注意语法准确性，提升表达自然度。

예시: I usually chat about my academic studies since I'm still a master's student, and we also share funny videos and comedies to lighten the mood.

제안: 回答清晰且有逻辑，但可以使用连接词使表达更连贯，如“because”后面加上“so”。

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I'm an introvert, so I feel more comfortable and can express myself more clearly than in a group.

제안: 回答内容完整，但有语法错误，如“allows me observe”应为“allows me to observe”，且“also”位置不当。建议注意语法和词序。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe my friend's body language and facial expressions, which helps me understand them better.

제안: 回答表达清楚，但有重复词“on on”，建议注意细节。可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics; however, we always try to understand each other's perspectives.

× For example, we often share our daily experience and support each other when we face problems.

✓ For example, we often share our daily experiences and support each other when we face problems.

experience是可数名词，表示经历时应使用复数形式experiences。

× Well, I usually talk about academic studies with my friend because I'm a still a masters student at university.

✓ Well, I usually talk about academic studies with my friend because I'm still a master's student at university.

masters应为master's，表示硕士学位时需使用所有格形式。

× Besides that, we often discuss comedies and funny videos since we all enjoy having a good laugh.

✓ Besides that, we often discuss comedy and funny videos since we all enjoy having a good laugh.

comedies通常指喜剧作品的复数，但此处更常用不可数名词comedy表示喜剧类型。

× Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me observe my friend's body language and facial expressions which helps me to understand him better also.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to observe my friend's body language and facial expressions, which helps me to understand him better as well.

动词observe前缺少不定式to；also位置不当，改为as well更自然；句中缺少逗号分隔定语从句。

× Yes, I do sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on on an important topic.

✓ Yes, I do sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on an important topic.

on重复出现，应删除一个。