Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Also, correct the phrase 'I feel stressed, free' to 'I feel stress-free' for natural English. Keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel stress-free and brings a sense of calm and peace.

제안: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be specific about topics to enrich your answer.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about my daily life, work experiences, family matters, and my plans for the near future. Additionally, we often share jokes, which makes our conversations enjoyable and comforting.

제안: Work on grammar and sentence completion. Avoid repeating phrases like 'at that time'. Clarify your ideas and complete your thoughts for coherence.

예시: My preference depends on the situation. When I am stressed, I prefer talking to my best friend to share my experiences. However, when I want to enjoy quality time and uplift my mood, I like to chat with a group of friends.

제안: Avoid incomplete sentences and filler words. Complete your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to contrast your preferences effectively.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to chat with friends while following my daily routine. However, when I want to spend quality time or have an emotional connection, I prefer face-to-face communication.

제안: Reduce filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. Be specific about the benefits of arguing.

예시: Yes, sometimes we argue about topics like politics or social issues because I believe arguments broaden our imagination and give us a chance to understand others' viewpoints better.

× I usually uh, discuss with my friends, like the my day-to-day life, my work experience, about my family and my near future plans and share jokes with them.

✓ I usually uh, discuss with my friends my day-to-day life, my work experience, my family, and my near future plans and share jokes with them.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used with 'discuss'. The verb 'discuss' is directly followed by the object without a preposition. Also, 'like the my day-to-day life' is incorrect; 'like' and 'the' are unnecessary here. The sentence should list the topics directly after 'discuss'.

× I feel stressed, free and it provides me a calm and peaceful, uh, feeling.

✓ I feel stressed and free, and it provides me with a calm and peaceful feeling.

The sentence lacks the conjunction 'and' between 'stressed' and 'free' to correctly list adjectives. Also, 'provides me a calm and peaceful feeling' requires the preposition 'with' after 'provides me' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to communicate on social media because it provides me freedom to, uh, do my daily, uh, route to follow my daily routine along with chatting my friends.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because it provides me the freedom to, uh, follow my daily routine along with chatting with my friends.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'communicate' in this context; 'via' is appropriate. Also, 'route' is incorrect; 'routine' is the correct word. Additionally, 'chatting my friends' should be 'chatting with my friends' to use the correct preposition.

× My preference is depends upon my situation.

✓ My preference depends upon my situation.

The verb 'is' is unnecessary here because 'depends' already serves as the main verb. The sentence should be 'My preference depends upon my situation.'

× If I'm stressed at that time, I only want to talk with my best friend and want to share my experience with her.

✓ If I'm stressed at that time, I only want to talk with my best friend and share my experience with her.

The second 'want to' is redundant and should be omitted for smoother sentence flow.

× But when I want to spend a quality time and want to uplift my mood at that time, I like to connect it.

✓ But when I want to spend quality time and uplift my mood at that time, I like to connect with them.

'A quality time' is incorrect; 'quality time' is uncountable and does not need an article. Also, 'connect it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'connect with them' referring to friends.