Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在时态混用和重复表达，建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. When we were younger, we used to talk face to face, but now we mostly chat online, especially on WeChat. I usually chat with them almost every day.

제안: 回答中有语义不清和口语填充词，建议使用更准确的词汇，避免语气词，并具体说明话题内容。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about what we eat and drink, as well as current events happening around us. These topics are quite interesting and help us stay connected.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达并注意语法准确性，如单复数和动词形式。

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because group chats can be noisy. Talking one-on-one helps me focus better on the conversation.

제안: 回答中句子结构不够自然，建议调整语序，避免断句不连贯，使表达更流畅。

예시: I used to prefer face-to-face communication, but now I prefer social media because it allows us to communicate not only with words but also with fun memes and emojis.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子较长且略显重复，建议分句表达，增强逻辑性和流畅度。

예시: When I was young, I liked to argue with my friends. However, now that I have grown up, I avoid arguments because I believe friendships should allow space for different ideas and opinions. We don't need to try to win over our friends with our views.

× but when we grew up, we chat.

✓ but when we grew up, we chatted.

这里描述的是过去发生的动作，应该使用过去时态。'chat' 应改为过去式 'chatted'。

× We chat to each other online.

✓ We chat with each other online.

动词 'chat' 后面通常搭配介词 'with'，而不是 'to'。这里应改为 'chat with each other'。

× I chatted. I chat with my friends almost every day.

✓ I chat with my friends almost every day.

前一句 'I chatted.' 不完整且时态不连贯，应删除。后一句使用一般现在时，符合习惯表达。

× I usually chat with my friends about our access, umm, our foods, drinks and uh, currently E events.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our access, umm, our food, drinks and currently events.

'foods' 一般用不可数名词 'food'，'currently E events' 可能是 'current events' 的误写，应改正。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of with a group of people because I think umm chatting with a group of people is a little bit noisy for me. I think communication with only one people can make me more concentrated concentrate on chatting.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of with a group of people because I think umm chatting with a group of people is a little bit noisy for me. I think communication with only one person can make me more concentrated on chatting.

'people' 是复数，表示多人，单数应使用 'person'。这里应改为 'one person'。

× I think communication with only one people can make me more concentrated concentrate on chatting.

✓ I think communication with only one person can make me more concentrated on chatting.

'concentrated' 后面应接介词 'on'，且 'concentrate' 是动词，句中应使用形容词 'concentrated'。

× Because via social media can we communicate not only with languages, with words, but also with interesting memes and emojis.

✓ Because via social media we can communicate not only with languages, with words, but also with interesting memes and emojis.

句子结构错误，疑问句语序 'can we communicate' 应改为陈述句语序 'we can communicate'。

× When I was young I liked to argue with my friends, but now I grew up so I don't like to argue with my friends because I think in our friendship there must be some space for different ideas and different opinions.

✓ When I was young I liked to argue with my friends, but now I have grown up so I don't like to argue with my friends because I think in our friendship there must be some space for different ideas and different opinions.

'grew up' 是过去式，表示过去动作，句中应使用现在完成时 'have grown up' 表示从过去到现在的变化。