Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Certainly I, uh, usually talk with my friends about, uh, you know, many things during, uh, about my life, about my school work, about my hobbies, as well as the things I do on a daily basis. I think, uh, sharing things with your friends have a certain benefit and it helps, you know, strengthen our relationship.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
Well, many things actually. For example, I would talk to my best friends about, uh, our favorite sports team, the, uh, Manchester United. I think you know that, umm, one of the, I think in my opinion, one of the greatest football teams ever in the history of Premier League.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
I think it all has its own merits. Uh, talking to a single person would usually mean that we are in a deeper tone of conversation we want to share about our personal things. Whereas for a group of people which has only want to talk about something in general, something in general.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
I think when it comes to deep talk, like when we want to share our personal problems, communicating face to face will definitely my goal to option because I think it brings a sense of bonding, it creates space as well as the atmosphere, you know, for you to get into a important conversation.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
Definitely, I think one of the things about friendship is that we all have our problems and if we are truly a meant for for each other, we are really connecting. We could also share not only the good stuff but also the crucial and bad things to help overcome.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ ngữ thừa và tiếng ừ, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.
예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends about various topics such as my daily life, school work, and hobbies. Sharing these things helps strengthen our friendship.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 75.0제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ không cần thiết và lặp lại ý. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
예시: I usually chat with my best friends about our favorite sports team, Manchester United, which I believe is one of the greatest teams in Premier League history.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one when discussing personal matters because it allows deeper conversations, while group chats are better for general topics.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ ngữ thừa, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.
예시: I prefer face-to-face communication for deep conversations because it creates a better atmosphere and strengthens our bond.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.
예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because true friendship involves sharing both good and bad experiences to overcome problems together.
문법
× I think, uh, sharing things with your friends have a certain benefit and it helps, you know, strengthen our relationship.
✓ I think, uh, sharing things with your friends has a certain benefit and it helps, you know, strengthen our relationship.
The subject 'sharing things' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× Whereas for a group of people which has only want to talk about something in general, something in general.
✓ Whereas for a group of people who only want to talk about something in general.
The sentence is structurally incorrect and incomplete. 'Which has only want' is incorrect; it should be 'who only want' to refer to people, and the sentence should be completed properly. This is a sentence structure error.
× communicating face to face will definitely my goal to option because I think it brings a sense of bonding, it creates space as well as the atmosphere, you know, for you to get into a important conversation.
✓ communicating face to face will definitely be my go-to option because I think it brings a sense of bonding, it creates space as well as the atmosphere, you know, for you to get into an important conversation.
The modal verb phrase is missing 'be' after 'will definitely'. Also, 'goal to option' is incorrect; it should be 'go-to option'. Additionally, 'a important' should be 'an important' due to vowel sound. This is a modal verb usage and article error.
× if we are truly a meant for for each other, we are really connecting.
✓ if we are truly meant for each other, we are really connecting.
The phrase 'a meant for for each other' is incorrect. 'Meant for each other' is the correct phrase without 'a' and with only one 'for'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.
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