Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和语法，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I often chat with my friends, especially when I feel sad or bored at work.

제안: 回答缺乏连贯性和具体细节，语法错误较多，且有过多的语气词。建议使用完整句子，提供具体话题，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about recent events in the city, changes at work, and news about people we know.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，句子未结束。建议注意动词形式，完成句子，并具体说明原因。

예시: I prefer talking with a friend rather than a group because face-to-face conversations are quieter and we can listen to each other better.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但用词不够准确，如“another interactions”应为“other interactions”，且句子结构可更自然。建议注意词汇搭配和句子流畅性。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we can have other interactions, such as eye contact and body language.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，明确表达观点。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because everyone has different opinions, which can lead to disagreements.

× Yes, I often chat with my friends especially when I feel sad or have a negative feeling and also when we are work we feel boredom we.

✓ Yes, I often chat with my friends especially when I feel sad or have negative feelings and also when we are at work we feel boredom.

这里“a negative feeling”应改为复数形式“negative feelings”，因为通常表达情绪时用复数形式；另外“when we are work”缺少介词，应为“when we are at work”；“we feel boredom we”中“we”多余，应去掉。

× Yes, I often chat with my friends especially when I feel sad or have a negative feeling and also when we are work we feel boredom we.

✓ Yes, I often chat with my friends especially when I feel sad or have negative feelings, and also when we are at work and feel bored.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词和正确的时态表达，应使用“and also when we are at work and feel bored”使句子通顺。

× Well, most, uh, I chat with my friends is, uh, something happened around like, uh, the city and, uh, the work change and, and. People.

✓ Well, mostly, I chat with my friends about things that happened around, like the city, work changes, and people.

原句结构不完整且断断续续，应调整为完整句子，使用“mostly”表示频率，“about things that happened”明确聊天内容。

× Well for me, I prefer to talking with a friends rather than the groups because I think when we talk face to face we have a quiet atmosphere and we can listen each other. It's a.

✓ Well, for me, I prefer talking with friends rather than groups because I think when we talk face to face we have a quiet atmosphere and we can listen to each other.

“prefer to talking”应改为“prefer talking”或“prefer to talk”；“a friends”应为复数“friends”且不加冠词；“listen each other”应为“listen to each other”，动词listen后需加介词to。

× Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because I think when we chat together we can have another interactions such as the eyes contact or body contact.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because I think when we chat together we can have other interactions such as eye contact or body contact.

“another interactions”应为“other interactions”，因为interactions是复数；“the eyes contact”应为“eye contact”，eye contact是固定搭配，不加复数和冠词。

× Yes, I always argue with my friends because because the opinions vary from people to people so if when we come across our thing we will have different opinion and we will argue for that.

✓ Yes, I always argue with my friends because opinions vary from person to person, so when we come across our things we will have different opinions and we will argue about that.

“the opinions”前不需冠词；“people to people”应为“person to person”表示个体间；“our thing”应为复数“our things”；“different opinion”应为复数“different opinions”；“argue for that”应为“argue about that”，动词argue后接介词about。